i kissed a girl - single cover

this is my first alt.

i made this alt of katy perry cause i was boredd.
i dont like the hair and the belt looks a bit weird but i didnt want to play with it cus [as you can tell] i suck at alts.

http://i37.tinypic.com/ek1cnm.png

please rate, tell me what i can improve, etc :)
all comments appreciated!! xx

for your first attempt thats pretty good, i think you could improve on the clothes like the belt isnt very isometric.

This isn't your first alt :S You've made more than this :p

It's not impressive at all,
The hair is one colour, Use different shades of brown instead of just one thing of black.
The belt doesn't look at all isometric either,
When recolouring things, try to use colours that compliment each other instead of extreme colours of Pink, Green etc.

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Originally Posted by iConz..

This isn't your first alt :S You've made more than this :p

It's not impressive at all,
The hair is one colour, Use different shades of brown instead of just one thing of black.
The belt doesn't look at all isometric either,
When recolouring things, try to use colours that compliment each other instead of extreme colours of Pink, Green etc.

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Agrees with conz

also :) dont make these zoom in alts :)

I'd try more black outlining the belt looks strange.

Looks really rushed tbh :\ sorry lol

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Originally Posted by iConz..

This isn't your first alt :S You've made more than this :p

It's not impressive at all,
The hair is one colour, Use different shades of brown instead of just one thing of black.
The belt doesn't look at all isometric either,
When recolouring things, try to use colours that compliment each other instead of extreme colours of Pink, Green etc.

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The only other thing ive done is put yellow instead of blue on the pool..

and thanks for the comments. i couldnt get the hair to look right at all when i tried it with browns and different shades. plus the belt - i know it isnt right but i couldnt work out how to fix it.
any tips on how to sort these?

not to be mean but...
its rubish!

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Originally Posted by zixin

not to be mean but...
its rubish!

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God, you've helped her so much :rolleyes:

Mm, it seems a little rushed and scribbled (if you know what I mean)
~ Try zooming in and making a outline pixel by pixel
~ Try use a wider range of shading but ones which dont clash

I'm sure you'll improve, 2/10.

its pretty cute :)
not bad for a first attempt grrrl!