Rate My Photo Booth.

I had recently come across ::Mattz::(http://www.habboxforum.com/member.php?u=54132) Alt and read the comments as normal people do. And I saw that some people decided that the colours just didn't "blend" well. So I took it upon myself to try and do something about this.

So this is an Alt/Recolour if his work, thanks ::Mattz:: For the inspiration.

::Mattz::'s One http://uploadpicz.com/images/WFZHLTA.bmp

My One: http://uploadpicz.com/images/XQD5NTX.bmp

And yes this is my first Alt/recolour..

So please; I am willing to take constructive criticism, but please Don't be too harsh.

Very chopy. You're missing a whole bunch of outlines (habbos face, part of the curtain rod, bottom of the booth, the sandal, the sweater, etc, etc, etc) And as for the black, it's all very flat with no defined shading. A trick for this is to use a bunch of really dark greys, just light enough for you to be able to tell the difference between the colour and the outline. If you even look at my icon right now, habbo's done the same thing, where you can still make out the outline even though I'm wearing a "black" shirt, and there's still room for shading too.

I like the addition of the person, but in the process you took out the seat, and now it kind of looks weird, because you don't sit on the floor of a photo booth, lol.

And also, the girl on the side looks like she was squished inwards so she could fit, which gives it a really awkward appearance. You should avoid that as a method.

This could have been a lot better if you just took your time with it. Perhaps give it another go.

5/10...........

It wasn't that good in the first place but to be quite honest you've made it much worse, sorry! :(

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Originally Posted by concretespoon

Very chopy. You're missing a whole bunch of outlines (habbos face, part of the curtain rod, bottom of the booth, the sandal, the sweater, etc, etc, etc) And as for the black, it's all very flat with no defined shading. A trick for this is to use a bunch of really dark greys, just light enough for you to be able to tell the difference between the colour and the outline. If you even look at my icon right now, habbo's done the same thing, where you can still make out the outline even though I'm wearing a "black" shirt, and there's still room for shading too.

I like the addition of the person, but in the process you took out the seat, and now it kind of looks weird, because you don't sit on the floor of a photo booth, lol.

And also, the girl on the side looks like she was squished inwards so she could fit, which gives it a really awkward appearance. You should avoid that as a method.

This could have been a lot better if you just took your time with it. Perhaps give it another go.

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This post outlines most of your errors and tells you how to improve, therefore I suggest you read it regardless of it's length.

a bit choppy but i love the idea :)

Second one looks nice