Attack Chopper

You know the drill, I spend ages making something, you tell me whats bad about it, I spend ages editing it and posting it again, where you point out the remainder of the bad stuff and how to fix it etc...

http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/8...erfinv20er.png
Shading sorter improved.
http://img328.imageshack.us/img328/3...erfinv16yz.png
http://img314.imageshack.us/img314/1...erfinv18qh.png sorter based on the AH-1S Cobra the American's use. I can't stand the tail. I Know it needs more shading but I'm not quite sure where :s . I Also reckon it's too slim, Actually looking at it again I totally hate it. So CC is EXTREMELY welcome.

Referance Image \/
http://www.redstone.army.mil/history...raft/ah-1s.jpg

It's ok, rather plain, needs a hell of a lot more shading. There is much more detail to do as well if you want it to be similar to the referance picture, there's aload of things attatched to it, weired compartment things. It looks like it would have taken ages though, some guy made a jet fighter plain similar to your helicopter thing, it's in the elites, you should referr to that too.

Its very nice, however, the tail looks like its as thin as paper.
Also you need some more shading at the front and at the end of it.
Other than that, its amazing.
8/10

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Originally Posted by Yukimura-

Its very nice, however, the tail looks like its as thin as paper.
Also you need some more shading at the front and at the end of it.
Other than that, its amazing.
8/10

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Agreed, shading should fix it though.

Hmm, ive just took a second look at the Habbo in the chopper likes slighty wierd.
I think the microphone should be a bit shorter and it shouldnt actually touch his mouth.
Also the patch over his eye looks a bit manky, I think it needs lowering a bit.

what he said, especially about the shading, it looks almost 2d

Shading sorter improved.
http://img328.imageshack.us/img328/3...erfinv16yz.png

OMG DUDE!!! great job!!!!

http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/8...erfinv20er.png
Another quick edit, I can see theres tonnes more to do but i'll get that done tomozzo.

I don't really like the shading, sorry.. 7/10.