[eS] New Habbo Fansite Layout!

Hey! Just finished another layout, and imo its much better than my first :)

Rate /10? Anything I can improve on? (this is only my 2nd ever layout :P)
http://i48.tinypic.com/2nu0qh2.jpg
Ill also be selling it if anyone wants it, post below or pm if interested :D:P

Matt

Wow, that is loads better than your first, But you can still tell its a paint job :(

C&C

Try adding some shading, i know its awkward in paint, but its makes the outcome alot better
and center you text, have it all following the same lines

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Originally Posted by 2fast2kwl

Wow, that is loads better than your first, But you can still tell its a paint job :(

C&C

Try adding some shading, i know its awkward in paint, but its makes the outcome alot better
and center you text, have it all following the same lines

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so would i add shading to the content boxes? is that what you mean?
from the first, i added shading to the titles of the boxes, do you mean add it to the inside aswell?

Matt

You're improving considerably.

Try using a different colour pallete. The colours used in that layout look like the default colour options in paint.

Also it's a bit small, try making it bigger?

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Originally Posted by Fazon

You're improving considerably.

Try using a different colour pallete. The colours used in that layout look like the default colour options in paint.

Also it's a bit small, try making it bigger?

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I can assure you that they're not default colours :P
and I'll try to make it bigger next time, thanks :)

I like it Matt but yeah the shading xD Overall a good layout!

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Originally Posted by ShazLouise

I like it Matt but yeah the shading xD Overall a good layout!

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thanks! :D

For a second layout, this is brilliant. I give you a 7/10.

To improve it, I would dim down the colors. I'm not talking all the way down to a pastel color, but I would take it down so it's not quite as bright as it is now. I know, you head everywheres, "Bright colors attract the eye!", but you'll find that with most websites, especially with Habbo Fansites, you don't want the prime colors in excess.

Again, great color for a second job!
~Dan

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Originally Posted by DannLea

For a second layout, this is brilliant. I give you a 7/10.

To improve it, I would dim down the colors. I'm not talking all the way down to a pastel color, but I would take it down so it's not quite as bright as it is now. I know, you head everywheres, "Bright colors attract the eye!", but you'll find that with most websites, especially with Habbo Fansites, you don't want the prime colors in excess.

Again, great color for a second job!
~Dan

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Wow, thanks!
Ill take the colours i use into consideration more next time, thanks for the advice.
+rep <3

Use Volter/Volter Bold for the box titles instead of Arial, then put a white outline around the text, would definitely improve it IMO.