One of my alterations

http://i46.tinypic.com/35bb9lz.png

what do you think :)

Not bad at all!

Although, I think she'd look nicer with lighter pants :P

Looks nice! The shoes need a little more shading on the front to make it look like it's pointy or w.e.

there menna be round like platforms but there not platforms

It's good, but you need to improve your shading.

How ^^ ??