[iAndy-] Alteration

http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/7943/altx.png
This is a alt that I made never took my that long but yeah. Feel free to criticise.

Its very nice :)
i love the long coat ;D

+rep

Its okay, but maybe you could of added some shading to the right arm.

Thanks ill fix it tommorow as im on my mobile now

Wow! Nice alt, his eyes look like he is high on drugs. +Rep!

Lool thanks

Im liking the glasses and coat andy :)

Thanks alot

Second attempt I just added a quick line of shading on the right armhttp://img11.imageshack.us/img11/4894/mand.png

Looks nice, though the briefcase looks a bit dodgy as its under the shoes? But apart from that its really good :)