Wedding Dress [Finished]

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And here is the finished version! Well, I will probably end up editing it as my alts are never perfect! Tell me what you think :D Enjoy :)

Woo! This is really nice! :)

Thanks Tom :)x

It's great, could do with a bit more shading at the top areas thoughxxxxx

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Originally Posted by Midnight

http://i56.tinypic.com/98enbp.png
And here is the finished version! Well, I will probably end up editing it as my alts are never perfect! Tell me what you think :D Enjoy :)

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The shading it quite hard to see tbh and, in my opinion, there are too many indents on the dress at the bottom and maybe the belt ribbon thing could look nicer in a dark red? Also the fact that she is picking up the dress seems to really do no affect to the lower half of the dress. Good effort though, perhaps expand it further to the head + some scenery?

I really like it, you've done a good job! Well done

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Originally Posted by dbgtz

The shading it quite hard to see tbh and, in my opinion, there are too many indents on the dress at the bottom and maybe the belt ribbon thing could look nicer in a dark red? Also the fact that she is picking up the dress seems to really do no affect to the lower half of the dress. Good effort though, perhaps expand it further to the head + some scenery?

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The bottom half of the dress isn't attached to the bit going over it, so the bottom bit doesn't really need to go up, and i thought the bottom might need less indents :') Thanks for the feedback ;3

I think you could of used darker colours to shade as its really hard to see now

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I've changed the colour of the bow :) I think i prefer it red too :P

Their criticism is fair, yet I do think you've done a beautiful job anyways, improving on the criticism would just make it 100% perfect and no one hits that on their first go :D