My First Mash Up! Listen to it & Gimme some comments please!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mgZ2T-OXPVM

I did it with :

Jeniffer Lopez feat. Pitbull - On The Floor
Britney Spears - Hold it Against Me
Edward Maya feat. Vika Jigulina - Stereo Love
LMFAO - Party Rock Anthem

My first time doing a mash up.

Yeah i know the beginning of the song is a bit weird :L Ikr. But i really dont know how to change it. I never use DJ Desk. I just used Power Sound Editor Free, some crappy audio editor to do this so yeah.

I spent like 4 hours doing this and remake again and remake and remake lol. And it still sounds very bad.

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It's OK, I do agree that the beginning is a bit.. odd. :P

I think perhaps you could of done it better as some of it just doesn't sound right, and one part sounds very similar to the habbo tracks.. :S

Apart from that it was good, but I think some adjustments could be made. :)

I like it, I'm heavily into mashups, I enjoy stuff by Mashup Germany, super mash bros, and independent stuff from http://www.remix.vg . It mostly sounds good, start is a bit off putting which I think needs to be catchy so you want to listen to the whole song ;)

I also hate half of the songs but they go good together.

I agree with Boxing (including hating some of the songs! :P). Overall it's all right actually, especially for a first mashup so good job! Like Boxing said, however, if I were to listen to that beginning I may have lost a lot of interest and not bothered listening to all of it even though the rest mainly was good! It wasn't great for a few bars from like 1:35, not sure why it just seemed as if one part was off beat and one was on beat, might just be me. :P I think the end was good purely because... well I don't know how to answer it and that's probably why I liked it. It was different and didn't have the first beat to end it which is very unusual nowadays. xD Definitely room for improvement but for a first try that's fantastic, good job. :)

Thanks for all the comments :D and the rep :D

Sorry video accidentally deleted. Lol. More advice please!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7b_dkTsdDgI

Its very good for a 1st go...

I like the middle & before "Hold It Against Me" comes in. I think the beginning does sound a lil odd & when "Hold It Against Me" comes in sounds a lil off beat too...

Its good though :)