Hotel View - The newer version?

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Originally Posted by Pyros!

Thanks for comments etc.. I'll upload an image with fewer writing on it, I liked the copy and paste on this one.

This aleration was made from scratch and was made for a certain website's mainpage.

I did not want it to follow the 'Habbo Theme'. I wanted it to symbolise that 'Habbowave' has it's own 'style/theme'.

The water is a leak? I dunno, I just thought it made it more attractive to look at with the water there.

The two poeple sitting on it are supposed to be statues.

Thanks for comments. I would however, like you to tell me, IF you can, on how I can improve it.

EDIT: I found out you can't edit the first post in your threads. A bit silly if you ask me, but even so, Find it below

http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/215...preview3rd.png

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urm y have u got that half naked guy on there ?
forgot his name :s because im not gay and dnt wont to know it
:p

I like it, but I don't like the 'Click on the hotel to begin' bit tho.

This is a prototype for a guy called Aaron, who is the owner of Habbowave.net. If you look at the site, you will notice that it is a little..... Poor.. But if you look at the site, you will see why it says 'click on the hotel to begin'.

'Habbowave Hotel'

EDIT: Naked Guy is Jhonny Squabble or however you spell it. I wanted the effect of an 'American Billboard'.

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http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/6...preview8az.png

Sorry. I didn't realise I double Posted

Johnny Squabble

*lubbs it*

Btw.. Sojobo is the 'Aaron Dude'.

The glass is really, way to dark. Needs to be alot lighter. The red is horrible as its a MS paint default colour. The lines towards the top left aren't really that equal. Need to be spaced out 2 at a time up//down repeat. 7/10

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Originally Posted by Xzoid

The glass is really, way to dark. Needs to be alot lighter. The red is horrible as its a MS paint default colour. The lines towards the top left aren't really that equal. Need to be spaced out 2 at a time up//down repeat. 7/10

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ud know MS Paint default colors off by heart dave :P
since u use them so much
:p

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Originally Posted by Xzoid

The glass is really, way to dark. Needs to be alot lighter. The red is horrible as its a MS paint default colour. The lines towards the top left aren't really that equal. Need to be spaced out 2 at a time up//down repeat. 7/10

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Yeah..
The windows should be less repetitive and lighter. The paint is horrible and there is no real feature. The sitting down habbo's and johnny squable don't go well either. 6/10