cool story 10/10
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cool story 10/10
Yeah, it's pretty good, but you mostly focused on one technique, vivid description, which is pretty good, but I think it could be even better.
Although I think it's very imaginative, in a kinda freaky way, maybe you were a murderer in a previous life.
never read it all "You breathe heavily as you stare down at the red-headed woman" *stops* but i read a bit more welldone and 9/10 ace!
Ooh God Wouldn't that make a great story plot!!Quote:
Originally Posted by .x-aimee-x.
Thankyou Aimee!
And quite possibly considering I am also writing a poem about a man who killed his lover :o I could have been Jack The Ripper
Hm...yes, perhaps, *scared*.Quote:
Originally Posted by Painiac
Lol, Don't fear me... I am justly misunderstood *disappears in a mysterious sweep of my cape* -.- lol
Great story. I enjoyed reading it. Short but very enjoyable. Rep added :D
Thankyou... I'm wondering whether I should hold a competition in which people make animations showing part of that story and I give a prize for best.
:o one word; WOW
Thankyou :)