Beggining to my story (may offend, sorry)

I kno it isnt hard to think up, its the content that counts.

I dont really like this story as its sad..
but its good.
8/10

Great intro. Rep added :D

Thankies. I will finish it one day soon. I cant be bothered atm.

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Originally Posted by .x-aimee-x.

I hate seeing people being bullied, my mates are kinda mean to the year 7, 8's n stuff, and the grungers, and when I say stuff they'll say something like, 'oooo, goodie two shoes', or something stupid like that...:confused_.

The story was good, even though everyone likes light-hearted, happy stories, life isn't always like that, so I think sad stories are most effective, and it's also nice for a sad story to have a happy ending.
Nicely done.

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awwwww, you can have some Skittles *hands bag of skittles* hehe, only .x-aimee-x. gets the skittles hehe, shhhhhh, dont share them with anyone, there yours, lol :D

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Originally Posted by :Kimi

awwwww, you can have some Skittles *hands bag of skittles* hehe, only .x-aimee-x. gets the skittles hehe, shhhhhh, dont share them with anyone, there yours, lol :D

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Er...thanks.

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Originally Posted by .x-aimee-x.

Er...thanks.

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:( fyne *takes aaway skittles* :p

Hee hee, i think you have an obsession with skittles kimi, you always seem to have a bag!!!

I love the story, i don't know what it's about though...
Is it about the boy getting bullied then going home and being beat up by his dad?
Or is it just his dad who beat him up?

Anywho, good story for a 12 year old. Its quite chilling though that a 12 year old actually can go into real depth about child abuse and bullying!!!!(Not offending you, its a good story, just suprising!)

He gets beaten up at school, then at home by his dad. I no it is strong, but i find it easier to write.

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Originally Posted by la-ur-en

Hee hee, i think you have an obsession with skittles kimi, you always seem to have a bag!!!

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Lol, yeah, I think everyone loves skittles, ahah, I want to live in Skittle World when I am older with my cat :)
***Random***
And then I will get married to Josh in the skittle castle, and then I will have a bath filled up with..... SKITTLES
***Random***

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Ill stop now

*hands skittles to Lauren* :( I CANT STOP AHHHH

lol, I cant stop reading your story skibs. it amaaaazing :)