[Poem] The contrast between two boys..

no girl would take about tht
they talk about
o my god i like this boy
or brag about there handbag of bratz or barbie

Love it <333 :)

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Originally Posted by Bloodkanekiller

Oi you copyed half of my idea
people starveing
and had enough of trying

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I'm sure she didn't copy you. I thought the poem was very good :) (Maybe Bloodkanekiller should learn to spell ;))

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Originally Posted by Bloodkanekiller

no girl would take about tht
they talk about
o my god i like this boy
or brag about there handbag of bratz or barbie

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Yeah.. I REALLY talk about bratz and barbies don't I.. DUDE! :rolleyes:
All because I'm a girl doesn't mean I can't write about something like this?

Thanks people.

I love the poem, it's beautiful, ignore Bloodkane.. if he was to write that poem it would go like this..

ACROS DA WORLD
TWO BOYS R CRYNG
BOTH WANT MOR3
AND TIERD OF DA TEH!!1!1111 OMG *** FIRST BOY LONGS FOR A MOUNTANE BIEK
AND BLMES HIM MUM FOR BNG MEAN
AL DAY DA GRED BURNS STRONG
AL TEH TEH GRED BURNS BRIGHT
BIEKS R 3VERYWHERA O Y IS LIEF SO TEH?!?!!!!! *** LOL SACOND BOY WANTS SOMATHNG 2 AAT
HIS MOTHER WEPS HALPLAS DEAD-BAT
WHIEL HIS FATHER HANGS HIS HEAD IN SHME
AL DAY DA HUNGAR BURNS STRONG
AL DA DA HUNGER BURNS BRIGHT
FOD IS EVARYWHER3 – O Y IS LIEF SO UNFARE

ACROS?!???!! *** LOL DA WORLD
TWO BOYS A CRYNG
ONAS FUL OF TEH OTHER IS DYNG
!11!1 OMG

Um.. Right.. i think you went a leetle to far..

Anyway, anyone else? ;)

I don't... I seriously can't stand him and glad he is gone. That poem is exquisite and should be published. :D