I understand the concept of explaining things later on in the story, but if you're going to do that you shouldn't write so much involving the things that we know nothing about. It makes it too confusing and very messy.
Printable View
I think... I might stop at Chapter 5, because this is just a spin-off of one of the other novels I've been working on.
I might just delete it all and start on the real one.....thanks for the tips guys, I'll make my decision by tommorow
Looooooooooonng Decision.... decided that all chapters after this I'll have to do something special with.... the Book is finished now, after it's final edit. Expect every single chapter up by next week.
I'm going to start on something small after it, then plan the 2nd Meaning of Memory story.