this is going to sound so harsh
but
literally everything
Sorry im hard to please so ignore my low score
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OK, fair enough. Everybody is intitled to an opinion. How could I improve it?
i dont realy like it either, its the colours i dont like the most. but well done for trying :)
What colours should I use instead then?
Image doesn't work for me
it's not too ba,d it has a nice concept.
Try alligning it all , so it looks tidier. Then bringing the thickness of the lines down, make the font sharp as someone said and try around with colours, and posible gradients :)
+rep because I like the idea