Unfinished Diner

changed it from a diner to maybe a shop/pub, not sure


http://i42.tinypic.com/10qc9ig.png

Always try to remember where your light source(s) are and if there are more than one, show it in the image (I.e. a lamp, torch, street light, etc.)

I see in your image that you have shaded your building, then you have randomly drawn a shadow towards the light source... What's going on there?

It's looking okay though, not the best I've seen but... just... okay.

re done the the light source and shading, does it look okay or is the shading to much?


http://i44.tinypic.com/2sacdhw.png

It should be more like this

http://www.iaza.com/work/090620C/hxf2159245.png

As you can see, the shadow stops at the edge, as you don't usually see shadows going into thin air, they will always be on something e.g. floor/wall etc. Also, the sides of the building should be shaded like this instead of the way you have done it, since it was darker on the side of your lightsource where it should have been lighter. Hope this helped.

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Originally Posted by Kyle

It should be more like this

http://www.iaza.com/work/090620C/hxf2159245.png

As you can see, the shadow stops at the edge, as you don't usually see shadows going into thin air, they will always be on something e.g. floor/wall etc. Also, the sides of the building should be shaded like this instead of the way you have done it, since it was darker on the side of your lightsource where it should have been lighter. Hope this helped.

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Yh, I actually like that remade version because the original was too shadowy!

But overall Cutter, nice work. :)

One question..
Why is the right wall two different shades on either side of the sign? lol

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Originally Posted by Mounta1nGoat

One question..
Why is the right wall two different shades on either side of the sign? lol

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lol, good point, only just noticed that, i had that wall darker at first, but then i changed the light source

Awsome idea, possibly try to add some large windows and have a banner or something?

cheers, i'm thinking of adding a window

When should we be expecting the complete version?

On-topic: Nice!, But as alot fo people have been saying, make the billboard smaller- maybe add something to the outside walls, Windows? Wanted posters?

Good Work!