[Rk] - End of Habbo City (Sp Entry)

The bricks are improved but they all have the same on them; I realise that it's going to take a while but try to get rid of the monotony of it, mix it up a little. hair looks okay but it seems as if a bird has just... on her head.

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Originally Posted by Kyle

The bricks are improved but they all have the same on them; I realise that it's going to take a while but try to get rid of the monotony of it, mix it up a little. hair looks okay but it seems as if a bird has just... on her head.

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It's really hard to shade her hair >:S, the bricks ive actually not kept the same spots on them.. i mixed a lot of variations

add some shattered glass to the floor and around the frame would replace the fact of having a full window. And fill it with more action.

should add some sort of rim around the bottom of the house to so its not just half a brick so it'll be a little edge, red would probaly be best to use.

i agree with the hair the white bits look nasty, with her hair use purple, dark blue and all greys. (with black) it'll look good if done right.

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Originally Posted by Voiceover.

add some shattered glass to the floor and around the frame would replace the fact of having a full window. And fill it with more action.

should add some sort of rim around the bottom of the house to so its not just half a brick so it'll be a little edge, red would probaly be best to use.

i agree with the hair the white bits look nasty, with her hair use purple, dark blue and all greys. (with black) it'll look good if done right.

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i like the idea of adding the rim, about the hair i am not sure how to shade it :S i am still wondering how...

i think the way you done it in your wedding one with more detail would do it for you. Just follow from the flicks add blue around the furthest end like you would on a ball and it would look like light hitting it the purple, all the colours could be used to make the hairs seperate to.

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Originally Posted by Rollerkingdom

oo i like it. can i add it to my piece? i liked the mud idea
also
another update
http://i34.tinypic.com/ets9w6.png
• added window frame
• added some light source of the laser beans to the girls hair
• added some details on the bricks

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Why does she have my man juice on her still? Lol.
I can't realy criticise it personally because I think it's alright considering the colour limits and that.
Maybe redesign some lasers so they're not all the same?

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Originally Posted by Voiceover.

i think the way you done it in your wedding one with more detail would do it for you. Just follow from the flicks add blue around the furthest end like you would on a ball and it would look like light hitting it the purple, all the colours could be used to make the hairs seperate to.

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Ill try doing it but if i fail ill prb just leave it like this xD

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Originally Posted by dbgtz

Why does she have my man juice on her still? Lol.
I can't realy criticise it personally because I think it's alright considering the colour limits and that.
Maybe redesign some lasers so they're not all the same?

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thanks for the idea.. ill make some diff colors

Small update:
http://i37.tinypic.com/qox3sw.png
• Made some diff color of lasers
• added rim to the wall of building

woman looks like she's covered in semen

Grass looks a tad better, being the other way round

Light Green >> Dark Green

Dark Green >> Light Green

Try it with different shading...

But i dnno :P