Me In Poster.

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Originally Posted by Chokeslammer

Not bad, 6/10

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Lol...give C&C then, whats bad about it so it gets 6/10?

It looks like he is standing behind the poster poking through, if that's what it's meant to be then I won't continue...

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Originally Posted by Roboevil

It looks like he is standing behind the poster poking through, if that's what it's meant to be then I won't continue...

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How about this then? =\

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...EvilBetter.gif

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...etterBlack.gif

...No, what I mean is that the position looks weired and you have missed out the crease lines on it.

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Originally Posted by Roboevil

...No, what I mean is that the position looks weired and you have missed out the crease lines on it.

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That would be kinda hard in an animation though coz she'll need to redo the frames and stuff, good job Zebila 9/10 +rep

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Originally Posted by Roboevil

...No, what I mean is that the position looks weired and you have missed out the crease lines on it.

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I Agree, the face isnt directly under where the poster stands either.
It makes the appearance of the face is trying to get out of the poster.
Try remove the face and put lines of where the part is that is directly under. then add the face and have the line right on the nose, then remove the line and fix the line.
Btw, why is it saying No Zebila?
Good idea, +2
Face Positioning, -1
Peeking Through Effect, -2
Outcome, +0-
Overall 8/10