Wonkas Chocolate Factory WIP

I really like it its top-notch the pool is better than the stream idea before...
The chocolate looks abit weak, its like murky water.. you should try and thicken it up 9/10 + rep so far !

Good base :P
10/10

Lol good but if you look in the pool some chocolate is green :p

Thats alright.

8/10.

[Nothing can be perfect].

Thanks guys. aint got much further. In middle of doing the bridge! aaah Im using the bridge in the gardens but im doing it from scratch like cos i need to make it slightly bigger some im trying to copy the pixels and my little brain is getting confused!
http://img379.imageshack.us/img379/3...tory0um.th.png
Ooo and i put choco blocks in the pool ;)

i spy pixel errors.. also chocolate isnt see through?

This chocolate is :D lol il sort the pixel errors out when its finished ;]

I love it bef but the choc water should definitely be more translucent "/, thicker than it is. I can't even see it =[

everything else is amazing tho <3 as always

The base looks good-

for mr wonka you coud use or edit this

http://www.habboxhosting.com/resourc...sh-small-A.gif

and the tube in the lobby as a refrence for the tube the boy gets stuck in :P

Looks ok 8/10