I fixed your mistakes for you in your version of 'better wording'.
You don't respect any body's work, no matter if they are brand new or looking for help, you frown on them completely. Yet, when you seek help, you expect everybody to be your best friend. You're like a chav and a Police Officer. They hate them, but when they need them, they are suddenly best friends with them.
No need for the boldness, I can see clearly that you're being immature and lame, no need to point it out to me.

