Paul Saw Everything (HW Peice i did)

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23-09-2007, 08:44 PM
edible

That's really very good. Well done.
25-09-2007, 03:06 PM
Spherical

Well done, one tip, dont use so many short sentences, use a comma so the line elongates ^_^

Well done + rep
25-09-2007, 03:09 PM
Nemo

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Originally Posted by FlyingJesus

A'ight cool, with that in mind then it's really rather good. One thing to watch out for is too much repetition - it's a good thing in small doses but having "he" or "Paul" at the start of each clause does make it a bit heavy on the brain :P

Thanks :) Ill take that into consideration

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Originally Posted by blondie!

That's really very good. Well done.

Thanks

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Originally Posted by Spherical

Well done, one tip, dont use so many short sentences, use a comma so the line elongates ^_^

Well done + rep

I did it for effect lol :P and thanks for the rep ^^
26-09-2007, 07:21 PM
iluv2spam

Yah its good

(Didnt read it)
26-09-2007, 08:02 PM
Nemo

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Originally Posted by iluv2spam

Yah its good

(Didnt read it)

Thats just pretty pointless then? Thanks anyway.
29-09-2007, 01:39 PM
Janet Snakehole

Nicee.
[:
30-09-2007, 12:32 PM
Ealo

thats great :)
wd
30-09-2007, 09:12 PM
Throne Sofa

Very good.
02-10-2007, 08:07 PM
Nemo

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Originally Posted by Pl0x.

Nicee.
[:

Thanks :D

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Originally Posted by Ealo

thats great :)
wd

woo thanks ;]

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Originally Posted by Throne Sofa

Very good.

Thank you ;]]]
06-10-2007, 08:15 PM
Fez

Dude, that was freckin' amazing. But needs speech like ''yo giys'' said the man.

Brilliant description though, maybe make a big story?

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