feedback? :)

I hate that the graffiti just looks like its floating but good try :)

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Originally Posted by Stephen!

i'll tell ya what it actually looks like... know them sticker books where they give you a background and then the backpage there's loads of stickers that you can stick anywhere on the background

like that

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It's not the best, but with suggestions and tips everyone is giving you, it would look incredible! Make sure to take your time. :P

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Originally Posted by Ms.Aquamarine

It's not the best, but with suggestions and tips everyone is giving you, it would look incredible! Make sure to take your time. :P

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yeah i'm gunna redo all of it and get it in before the deadline :)

Nice! Can't wait to see it!~ :)

Admittedly, I've tried avoiding this for a while.

http://i.imgur.com/TSBjs.png

Ok.

- Why have you randomly cut out the room? And the lines aren't even straight round the edges. And theres no 1px Black Outline?
- The Limo has 'improved' since your initial entry, but theres still choppy cut outs and theres no black outline again.
- The girl sat on the chair on the left hand side. Again, another choppy cut out. with no black outline.
- The Ramps. Not gonna lie, they look ****. Choppy cut out, and no black outline again.
- The levitating skateboarders. Where were these taken from? I don't believe you've made them(but if you have, I apologize). They look out of place and you have to take into consideration the size of them in comparison to the ramps.
- The Spray cans & paint on the floor. Gah, eyesores in themselves. You've used bog standard paint colours? These should be from a habbo colour wheel, rather than paints own. They should also have shading.
- The random floating bin on the right. What's even with that!?

As said previously in this thread, follow this tutorial on how to make your Graffiti look better on the wall.

Hope this helps.

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Originally Posted by Kasabian

Admittedly, I've tried avoiding this for a while.

http://i.imgur.com/TSBjs.png

Ok.

- Why have you randomly cut out the room? And the lines aren't even straight round the edges. And theres no 1px Black Outline?
- The Limo has 'improved' since your initial entry, but theres still choppy cut outs and theres no black outline again.
- The girl sat on the chair on the left hand side. Again, another choppy cut out. with no black outline.
- The Ramps. Not gonna lie, they look ****. Choppy cut out, and no black outline again.
- The levitating skateboarders. Where were these taken from? I don't believe you've made them(but if you have, I apologize). They look out of place and you have to take into consideration the size of them in comparison to the ramps.
- The Spray cans & paint on the floor. Gah, eyesores in themselves. You've used bog standard paint colours? These should be from a habbo colour wheel, rather than paints own. They should also have shading.
- The random floating bin on the right. What's even with that!?

As said previously in this thread, follow this tutorial on how to make your Graffiti look better on the wall.

Hope this helps.

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yeah it does help, idk why i was using them sort of colours, that was my first attempt at alts and like you've pointed out, it failed which i know

Sorry if it came across a little harsh.

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Sorry if it came across a little harsh.

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it's fine, being harsh is the key lol

Its not too bad,, but with edits it could be a whole lot sharper :) Good try.