I'm glad I waited until I was back with the time to sit and take note of everything going on in this rather than watching it with laptop speakers rustling and conversations going on through the viewing. Have to say I really liked it - the twist made it actually a lot more human and emotive where it may otherwise have been a contrived monologue set around a pretty house (as a side note the kitchen looked amazing I want to cook my chicken nuggets there, buy me that house please) and there was just the right amount of threads left open vs tapered off, which I had partway through thought might be a problem as it seemed a lot was being explained. I'm not a master of lighting and lenses and all that so can't properly comment on that side of things but the writing is
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and deserving of a glittery gif, the idea of what is "meant" to be written in such a situation was manipulated in a really silky fashion, I really can't fault the lines at all. Honestly I was expecting something that was well put together but done with a media grad in-crowd feel to it with the sort of pretentious nonsense that I've become used to from most people who find themselves in artistic industries, but this is actually something that anyone could sit and watch, and I genuinely applaud the effort and the outcome
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