OH MY GOD :O

I think the tune and beat is actually pretty good! But the vocals aren't the best and the effects don't really help. :P

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Originally Posted by jackass

I think the tune and beat is actually pretty good! But the vocals aren't the best and the effects don't really help. :P

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Originally Posted by Haaaaarry

i know my voice isn't amazing but i try my best, but i have songs i did like a year ago and it's improving all the time so i'm not at my 'peak' or anything yet :P

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I am probably going to sound really critical, but I am trying to be constructive.

I don't think you have a great voice, but we will go over that as you can't help that.

The main thing for me, is when it got quite 'bassey' the volumes weren't quite right - I think your voice was too quiet, and the beat was too loud.

Why not download Cubase (or pirate it..), as you will probably find it a much better program for recording on.

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Originally Posted by Milestone

I am probably going to sound really critical, but I am trying to be constructive.

I don't think you have a great voice, but we will go over that as you can't help that.

The main thing for me, is when it got quite 'bassey' the volumes weren't quite right - I think your voice was too quiet, and the beat was too loud.

Why not download Cubase (or pirate it..), as you will probably find it a much better program for recording on.

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i have spoke about my voice in this thread so i will skip that comment
and i have used cubase before and i actually hate it but i appreciate your comment and your honesty thanks :)

I read what you said about your voice, and to be honest, I agree with Nemo.

each to their own, thank you for your opinion :)