Bad Habbo-My First Alt!

Its called Bad Habbo....its also my first alt!Plz rate it 1-10/10http://atlas.walagata.com/w/redflame/.badhabbo.png
Also...if u can...plz tell me what I could do to make it better...

hmmmm
its ok for your first alt
try to take more time in your alts and try reading tutorials before you make them

Ya,i had to hurry though becasue Im about to go somewhere so :P

lol did make me laugh, try zooming in on your work and adding detail like shade and shape. 5/10 for 1st alt

ummmmm well it's ur first alt every right? well if it is I guess it's ok. but keep practicing and to make it better you could add sum shading to a lot of it where u didn't

too messy soz

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:o , its a bit messy..
0/10

Really Messy!!!

hmm.....
there is a lot to discuss here, one thing i cannot stress enough is to not use the top box when filling text, moving items, or drawing squares.
it's confusing to understand w/o opening paint, so I considering thouroughly looking thorugh some of the help section in paint.
try looking at some other ppl's alts next time