My alts..

On every forum I go on I post my alts, so if you've seen them before then it's cos I've posted them, I do NOT rip. They're not good enough for anyone to rip anyway lool!

done these when I'm bored

axl younger
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/7...axlrosegx4.png
axl recent
http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/8...osemic1zo5.png

Ozzy osbourne xD
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/9...sbournejf0.png

And I'm currently working on a big stage set type thing, full of guns n' roses. However I've only done axl lool, and I cba to do the other band members!

Pls rate, *removed*

micky.blue.eyes (forum mod): Please don't ask for rep.

They're quiet good, but when the habbo is facing foward I find alts ugly.

I like the osbourne one. :]

I think the clothes need a teeny bit of shading!

Nice try, good luck improving your alts.


6/10

Also don't ask for rep pls, its not allowed, you'll get infractioned so quickly edit your post. (:

I'll rep you when I have 1 rep power, I'll put you in my sig now tho.

I'm not asking for rep, as it's up to you whether you give obviously, I'm saying it's appreciated if anyone does! just a thanks in advance :P it won't let me edit my post so I can remove it anyway :/
and thanks lool, and zoom in or something, there's no more shading that can be done to it pretty much, well, to keep it looking habbo-ey.

You could add a darker grey line to the inside of the light grey lines on Axl's jacket. Just stuff like that.
Go from the ISO view, more of a challenge but better results.

I've never done it facing front to be easier, that just seems to be how I take the first screenie lool :P and I aint planning to redo it in iso view thx :P!!

and pls note.. I did these in 5 mins. I ain't an alt artist, I just do when I'm bored, as I'm sure you can tell! :P

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Originally Posted by MrPresident

You could add a darker grey line to the inside of the light grey lines on Axl's jacket. Just stuff like that.
Go from the ISO view, more of a challenge but better results.

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Yeah thats what I mean, it needs more detailed shading, maybe a bit of dithering where there arm meets the shirt so its a bit of shadow from where the light source is coming from.

(:

So CC on these ones?
First one:
-Looks like a chick.
-Add a line of shading on the face, under the hair.
-Make the tatoo a lighter shade and move it one to our left, maybe add some more with different colours.
-Shading under the shorts.

Second:
-Hair looks a state, try and use the shading from an original Habbo hairstyle.
-Add shadows to the shirt, underneath the jacket.
-Change the buttons to a lighter shade, then add a shadow underneath.
-Add shadow to the skin, in the trouser holes.
-Add shadow to jeans, under the shirt.

Last:
-Add another shade to the chain.
-Add a lighter colour to the jacket.
-Put shadows/bags under his eyes.

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Originally Posted by MrPresident

So CC on these ones?
First one:
-Looks like a chick.
Some say Axl does.
-Add a line of shading on the face, under the hair.
Eh?
-Make the tatoo a lighter shade and move it one to our left, maybe add some more with different colours.
Flipping heck, this aint a masterpiece.
-Shading under the shorts.
The shorts were exactly the same as they were on habbo? I havnt changed them at all!

Second:
-Hair looks a state, try and use the shading from an original Habbo hairstyle.
It is, LOL
-Add shadows to the shirt, underneath the jacket.
Yes, I should have done that. Cba to edit now :P Maybe later.
-Change the buttons to a lighter shade, then add a shadow underneath.
-Add shadow to the skin, in the trouser holes.
Yeah cos that'll make such a difference..
-Add shadow to jeans, under the shirt.

Last:
-Add another shade to the chain.
-Add a lighter colour to the jacket.
-Put shadows/bags under his eyes.
No trust me, it looks awful, I tried and I experimented, eyes looks best like that.

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and got anything nice to say about it?
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I mean, if you're gonna criticise it that much you might at least want to find 1 thing good about it.

Calm down, hes giving you hard cc so you can make it better!

:/

I'm giving Constructive Criticism, it's what I received and if you can't take it, you'll be quickly disliked.
The fact you can't read simple sentances and dismissing the effort I put into helping you improve has already put you on my list of people I'll just critisize in a blunt and rude manor/manner.
(I'm really paranoid about spelling, punctuation and grammer/grammar now =|.)

The mic stand also lacks a light source, it is the same colour all over.

http://img364.imageshack.us/img364/8086/habbo1pw.png
http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/303/solwip8jk.png
Details make a difference.