The Great... um... Swiss Cheese Bar?

Like the title? Rate /20, I seem to have gotten better with /20 than /10 :) for my first 2 alts, here we go now, here we go now :p I had to jpeg it unluckily :(

Aw, sorry to burst your bubble and all but that alt is quite poor. Is cheese grey? Doesn't cheese have holes in it? What about shading? Here, I'll give you some help. Check out this link:

http://www.pixelfreak.com/tutorial/

2/10 - Keep practising and use that link I gave you to a tutorial to help you.

err....what is it?

:s

It's a bar that's made of swiss cheese, the holes are the holes, the shadow in the holes is all you see, because assuming the light is straight up, the shadow would be in the holes, AND I said /20 not /10, ALSO AND I don't read! *very annoyed* :@ :@

1.The holes dont look like holes, they are flat. Give them depth.
2.There is no lightsource.
3.Habbo furniture has black outlines.
4.Cheese is yellow.. Last time I checked.
5.It's square? Cheese is more rounded than a block.
6.JPEG quality. Needs to be .PNG

Also, you say you don't read yet you reply to my posts? I'm not trying to be picky here, I'm trying to help you to improve. If you don't want to improve, thats fine, I'm only helping.

Regards

erm..its odd..what can i say lol :S 2/10

2 minuts?
1/10 :eusa_shhh

i thought u was tryin to do a dirty brick lol 1/20 like u sed out of 20

0/20 do real bricks :)

1:Quite Poor
2: Is Chees Grey?
3: No Shading
4: Rating : 2/20

P.s. I Know Rares Values Better+I can Make Alts Better. :)