2nd attempt

Ok i knew there were some bits i could touch up on but didn't quite know what so here is my second attempt at it if you wish to view my first one here is the link: http://www.habboxforum.com/showthread.php?t=491988
Here is my 1st attempt
http://www.iaza.com/work/080609C/nik...80277-iaza.gif




Here is my 2nd attempt
http://www.iaza.com/work/080610C/nik...64171-iaza.gif

Rate please

Second attempt much better (:

Why not just edit your first post instead of making a new one? Anyway I still
dont like it.

I couldn't edit my first post on my other thread derrr.

And can you tell me WHY you don't like it please so i acn improve on it

MOD CLOSE THREAD PLEASE !

Edited by Favourtism (Forum Moderator): Please do not double post. Also please note that moderators do not close threads on the request of users.

Second Attempt Much Better Now!

Its alot smoother,

Also, I don't see why it should be closed? :)

but yeh, Alot better!

You can't close threads unless your a VIP.
Nor can MODS do it for you.

Anyway, better than before.
Well done.
Straighter lines too :)

Thanks alot for the comments guys is there anything i should improve ?

I also wanted it closed as i have 2 threads on the same thing now lol unless a MOD can merge them for me ?

Well its certainly a lot smoother, much better than your first well done.

much smoother, nice work. please move on from enlargements now