Opinions?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aa6jfHljpdo

Yeah so I wrote this song and I'd love some opinions on the lyrics, which are in the description box :) I know I'm not a good singer/guitar player but I like writing lyrics so I said I'd give a go at singing it :D

xo

I actually love those lyrics, not joking they are great. Thats a proper good song :)

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Originally Posted by Pyroka

I actually love those lyrics, not joking they are great. Thats a proper good song :)

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I don't think they're that good haha but thanks :)

Nah theyre pretty damn good :P

Wow you're actually a really good songwriter! Im not sure if its just me but the guitar might be a little out of tune? And also you're quite a good singer as well. How long did it take you to write that?

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Originally Posted by Haaaaarry

Wow you're actually a really good songwriter! Im not sure if its just me but the guitar might be a little out of tune? And also you're quite a good singer as well. How long did it take you to write that?

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doesn't sound out of tune o_O Its just when she hits from the bottom upwards when you get the difference.

but dayum you really have talent, I want get back into playing my guitar again but no doubt all strings are snapped on all 3 since i ain't played in 2 years and they're froze in the shed :P I dunno how to play all strings at the same time i quit lessons the year before i learned that and i really wanted to be able to do it :(

Oh right my bad lol

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Originally Posted by Haaaaarry

Wow you're actually a really good songwriter! Im not sure if its just me but the guitar might be a little out of tune? And also you're quite a good singer as well. How long did it take you to write that?

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I'm pretty sure its not out of tune, I'm just not very good at playing it haha. I think it took about 20mins to write? I can't remember exactly how long because this was at 4am :P

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Originally Posted by Voiceover.

doesn't sound out of tune o_O Its just when she hits from the bottom upwards when you get the difference.

but dayum you really have talent, I want get back into playing my guitar again but no doubt all strings are snapped on all 3 since i ain't played in 2 years and they're froze in the shed :P I dunno how to play all strings at the same time i quit lessons the year before i learned that and i really wanted to be able to do it :(

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I just learned off you tube :D Thats probably why I'm so bad, I've only been playing a few months, you should start learning again :)

i might do in the summer holidays i could play the james bond theme tune ;D

Does da internetzzz have any song lyrics for guitars anymore, years ago when i searched there were literally none :( i wanna learn to play like paolo nutini to :P

20 minutes :O wow you have tallleennt