Walk the Plank *Aye me-maties!*

My first proper alt. I normally do recolourings so I thought I would have a try at this. It is my first room alt. from scratch, so constructive critisism please. Rate /10
http://img479.imageshack.us/img479/5...ank36al.th.png


Oh, and heres some work in progress:
http://img461.imageshack.us/img461/4...ank29li.th.png
http://img461.imageshack.us/img461/5...ank15yv.th.png

the actually plank is good but the rest could be more habboish
6/10

the red line isnt straight .. and the door looks dodgy

6/10

I know, as I said it's only my 1st proper room alt.

Looks cool, its very easy to see where you've used paint, but other then that 8/10.

Thanks for replies, keep them up.

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Originally Posted by Preposterous!

I know, as I said it's only my 1st proper room alt.

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It's your only 1st proper alt you havent ripped :rolleyes:

Good tho, 5-6/10

Lmao Tom. Thanks.

Well my glasses must be dirty, because I can't see one thing wrong with the alt *wonders if I should magnify also...*. definately 9/10. I don't like the doorway. lol :p

Keep em coming preposterous

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Originally Posted by BuketHead01

the actually plank is good but the rest could be more habboish
6/10

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:o Took the words outta my mouth.

Lol, thanks for tips.

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Originally Posted by Aight.

Looks cool, its very easy to see where you've used paint, but other then that 8/10.

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All pixel artists use paint for the whole of their alts. ¬.¬