skate park update (wip)

hey this is my updated skate park. rate out of 10 and c+c. btw i still have a couple of ramps i designed to add (vert ramp and spines/transfers)
http://img439.imageshack.us/img439/2...skaters3sw.png

Some of the skaters look bojed. 9/10 looked better before.

its good apart from the curved ramps, thay need more shading on them! 8/10

it looks quite dodgey if you get what i mean. its too big for the window

try making it a bit smaller. also add a few more bars.

You could make a wall too at the back (like habbo rooms) and add stuff like signs, graffitti etc on it.

thats just a suggestion :)
but its great so far :)
9/10

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Originally Posted by Aquae

it looks quite dodgey if you get what i mean. its too big for the window

try making it a bit smaller. also add a few more bars.

You could make a wall too at the back (like habbo rooms) and add stuff like signs, graffitti etc on it.

thats just a suggestion :)
but its great so far :)
9/10

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im already designing the graffitit. btw you have to click on the image to expand it. add a few more bars? do you mean grind rails?could someone help me with the body positions plz?:D:d btw which skaters look bodged?

lmao i did click on it :P

it looks all packed together on such a small screen :P

yeah i mean grind rails :)

4/10 with people, because of the errors, what youve done is just shrunk them, and it makes the whole park look, as DJ-Simpson put it, bojed! the boards are ok though!

:o! The girl at the back has Pink and Black DCs! I So want some Pink and Black DCs!

when skating your arms don't go straight down ;)

maybe add a bowl and someone doing a darkslide and or manual ?

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Originally Posted by foxmoth

when skating your arms don't go straight down ;)

maybe add a bowl and someone doing a darkslide and or manual ?

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i kno but they dont go in the air (habbo wave) and i kept messin up the body positions. so thats why i asked for help. i quite like the grey jeans legs i did but the blue jeans legs arent that great in fact they ****. :( HELP!!!

Top of skateboards to dark and bottoms to bright.. lol 8/10

ok dude on the rail should have knees bent and be looking at the end of the rail

THE BOARDS NEED ALOT OF WORK!

And so do the legs ;)

5/10 Lack of shadows and maybe raise their arms?