My latest bowling alley!

Sorry guys, I havent posted an alt in agessss! :o I always do people alts, I once tried to do a garden guest room, but the benches were public room size! So this is my first PUBLIC room alt. Its quite a funky modern room too! I havent finished yet, you can see ive started doing the stands that the bowling balls go on (in the corner) please post a comment and rating, and some suggestions as i havent done any bar or decoration or seating, or anything yet! :D Also, Im not very pleased with the alleys they kinda look like theyre floating :s Any suggestions on that please? :( Thanks guys x

http://img323.imageshack.us/img323/8...ngalley1em.png

Wicked +REP

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Originally Posted by Carlsta

Wicked +REP

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Woo thanks for reply so quick, any suggestions on it? :D (Btw, I return rep ;))

Maybe add where the balls go and the gutter

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Originally Posted by Carlsta

Maybe add where the balls go and the gutter

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Ty, Ill start tomorrow morning ;)

It has some black line pixel errors on the side of the room
Perhaps try adding a place to sit/order shoes? :P
Also I think the door at the begining looks a bit wonky.
Other wise its pretty good so far if it's WIP - 7/10 ;)

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Originally Posted by .Mike-

It has some black line pixel errors on the side of the room
Perhaps try adding a place to sit/order shoes? :P
Also I think the door at the begining looks a bit wonky.
Other wise its pretty good so far if it's WIP - 7/10 ;)

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Shouldnt be wonkey, as I got the template from a HxF template section, Also thanks for the idea, ill do a little counter giving people shoes, and a little cafe and gutter when I get round to it ;)

Can't wait to see it finished. 8/10 :eusa_clap

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Originally Posted by .Mike-

It has some black line pixel errors on the side of the room
Perhaps try adding a place to sit/order shoes? :P
Also I think the door at the begining looks a bit wonky.
Other wise its pretty good so far if it's WIP - 7/10 ;)

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You have no clue about what your talking bout how can the door be wonky when its from habbo noob.

Erm, the bowling pins look odd. =/

I think that the floor should be a different colour to make it look un-floaty :p Anyway I like it +rep

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Originally Posted by Tré

You have no clue about what your talking bout how can the door be wonky when its from habbo noob.

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Why is it that I am a noob? you just flame me when I make a comment on this alterations forum because you think I go too harsh on people? sorry no I dont go too harsh, I just say what I think of the alt. and I could of used a different word than wonky, but the if u zoom in, the left side is blackened in more then the right side. take a look yourself.
http://img472.imageshack.us/img472/3140/door5el.png
so i'm not a noob.

very nice 9/10 +rep :)

Well it needs a bit of work but its a nice idia. The walls just dont seem to fit in i dont know why... Try adding some texturing to them or some advertisments.
Also you should try making one of those counters with the shoe racks and such.
An over all 7/10 + Rep

maybe a counter where you can oreder food aswell? :) i don't know im new to this stuff Lol anyways very nice i love it +rep :D

Amazing so far +Rep for you.

Its not that good.........

6/10

Pretty good, just needs more added on.

very nice :o 10/10 +rep
you could do one of the alleys with the sides up like some toddlers have up ( also if ur rubbish at bowling ) cant wait to see it finished ! :D

Seen as someone bumped a two and a half month old thread ill comment and rate. My rating is 7/10 so far, it's looking great.

Suggestions:

• Maybe change the colour of the floors or make a new 'textile' like the battle ball tiles.
• One tiny thing, whatever the colour of the base of the room change the ticker buyer to that colour (example, the room colour is pink, change furniture and ticket buyer to that colour - thats tiny and doesnt really matter)
• Theres a few pixel errors which have been pointed out so work on them.

If you do some of the things i've mentioned a different people have mentioned i'll give you a sexy rep and a 9/10.

no shading on the pins

omg u did this in 2005 i remember! its good yeah

The squares in between the alleys are smaller than the outside ones, maybe this is causing them to float?

6/10
Its all weird

Try putting an edited mode bar into their for were the balls come out.
Fix the paint.
Try to get some couches/chairs in their
And put some arcade games/ rooom-o-matics in their

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Originally Posted by RhabdoPhobia

no shading on the pins

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Lol there is ;)