'AoJ' Studios (MUST SEE)

Hello.

As I think the thread was removed.. I'll re post it ;)

Anyway This alt, In my opinion so far is my best alt. It took me over 4 hours to make it. No lies. I worked on it tons of time.

If you cannot understand, This days i'm making a flash show called 'AOJ' (Adventures of Jessica) which is placed at www.the-bec.net

The alt contain few rooms:
-: Main room above
-: Make up, Costumes and decorations room (Cptn.kewl - the show's pixel artist placed there, and one of the shows characters)
-: Tech & Control room ( LuckyRare - BEC's owner & Jackolusss - BEC owner aswell and the show's animator placed there)
-: Filming area (Me - Show's director placed there and one of the shows characters)

Anyway, Few mentions about the alt:
The red dragon, Crystal ball, Skeleton costume & Candle habbo was made by Cptn.kewl which is my show's pixel artist.
Also
The ghost costume was made by Roboevil which let me use it for my show.

PLEASE do not be harsh. Rate out of /10. Be nice.

http://img275.imageshack.us/img275/5...offices7wq.png

OMG that is BRILLIANT. There are a few pixel errors, but only 2. Basically, all I'm saying is

ELITES.

Are you blind?
6/10, mostly basic PA. This has been posted before, don't put us through it twice.

No I am not blind but I can see you are!!!

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Originally Posted by Dollars

Are you blind?
6/10, mostly basic PA. This has been posted before, don't put us through it twice.

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I so like people that aren't reading everything, and then blame you on nothing :rolleyes: .. As I said ALLREADY I thought and still think that my post been removed cus the forums backups and that's why I reposted the thread.

Second thin, I highly don't think that my alt is basic. I don't think it desrves 6/10, and I think your just being jealous.

But of course, that's only my opinion. Thanks <3

i think a bit more care could be taken;

for example the shadows are the wrong shame and many are the wrong shape.
some items such as the bush's on the top floor and the stickers on the left room could be improved.

7/10 | Good effort :)

Nice Im Liking It Parts I Like Most

The Hair Mop Great Idea :)
The Mirror <3
And The Costume Hanger

Bad Parts :(

Horrible Colours I Think Sorry
Lack Of Shading Sorry

I Give It 7/10 Great Try

P.s. Loving The Show <3

The shadows are horrible. The mirro needs tons of work with lighter colouring and better lines. The black tables... what happened? Too little shades of blue for the ball, the floor is horribly un-shaded and the wall needs a diffrent colour than MS Paints default blue. 6/10

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Originally Posted by kobi626

Second thin, I highly don't think that my alt is basic. I don't think it desrves 6/10, and I think your just being jealous.

But of course, that's only my opinion. Thanks <3

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Should have gone to specsavers. Let's read some of the other comments in this thread.

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Originally Posted by Foxmoth

i think a bit more care could be taken;

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Originally Posted by IAtePants

Horrible Colours I Think Sorry
Lack Of Shading Sorry

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Originally Posted by Xzoid

The shadows are horrible. The mirro needs tons of work with lighter colouring and better lines. The black tables... what happened? Too little shades of blue for the ball, the floor is horribly un-shaded and the wall needs a diffrent colour than MS Paints default blue. 6/10

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Please shout at these people before directing it completely towards me. Now, for your errors, i thoight i'd point out a view seeing as you seem to be completely oblivious to the fact this alteration should not have been reposted.

http://img371.imageshack.us/img371/6136/kobi11xv.png
Lets explain further:
1. Grey/green line in the floor, shows no effort whatsoever in floor shading.
2. That icky ball thing. What is it? Why is it so poorly shaded? And why does the shading go light/dark/light when it should be getting darker.
3. Who has ever heard of a blue shadow please raise your hand.
4. The stand has some pixel errors in as well as black lines which are not needed, somebody got black line happy in this alteration.
5. A copy and paste mark, it looks like this alteration has been cut out and pasted into the main 'masterpiece' and then poorly coloured in after.

http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/2057/kobi24gx.png
Lets explain a little further:
1. The divide has pixel errors again.
2. What in gods name created this desk? Either somebody got it off a scrap heap or lost their instructions for a flat pack ikea shelf.
3. Who spilled white paint on the desk? I just don't get why there is a white square there. In fact it can't even be paint because it's so square.
4. Everything is black, no shading and to top it off it's outlined in GREY.
5. That amazing floor again. Next time you print screen a habbo room put in the effort of colouring in ALL of floor? And maybe so the colour do not clash as bad.

And as for the me being terribly jealous of your alteration please take that thought out of your head immediatly. Hey, maybe you can check out and comment on one of my recent alterations sometime:
http://www.habboxforum.com/showthread.php?t=148150 - Furni Xposed
http://www.habboxforum.com/showthread.php?t=148283 - Recliner
http://www.habboxforum.com/showthread.php?t=147966 - Coaster Pieces
http://www.habboxforum.com/showthread.php?t=147914 - Tea Light

Hey i'm not amazing at alterations, i'm not special at all but at least i don't inflate my own head so much it won't fit out of the door. How do you fit so much self excellence in your post.

Great effort 7.5/10

as far as colourschemes go, it's hideous. the bunnies that look like they could give someone an epileptic fit? they don't help.

as for how it's pieced together... dreadful.

the dreads turned into a mop? that would be a nice idea, if it wasn't for the fact that it's been done 2 or 3 times before (originally on pixeli i think).

the one likeable thing is the dragon. but that's not exactly perfect.

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Originally Posted by Prexis (Neil)

as far as colourschemes go, it's hideous. the bunnies that look like they could give someone an epileptic fit? they don't help.

as for how it's pieced together... dreadful.

the dreads turned into a mop? that would be a nice idea, if it wasn't for the fact that it's been done 2 or 3 times before (originally on pixeli i think).

the one likeable thing is the dragon. but that's not exactly perfect.

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Couldn't have put it better myself, and the dragons not even his. Rofl.

Looks fine to me except I don't like the blue.
I think people in this forum are too hyphy on pixel errors.

Haha. Too hyphy, if habbo shaded like that and made errors like that i doubt many people would be playing.

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Originally Posted by Dollars

Haha. Too hyphy, if habbo shaded like that and made errors like that i doubt many people would be playing.

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Would you shut up and stop being evil? god! I tried my best, and I accept critizisem, but not being mean just like your attitude.

Go bugging someone else =\

I have only one comment for it...

Crap

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Originally Posted by lone_wolf

I have only one comment for it...

Crap

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Something we can all agree on...

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Originally Posted by kobi626

Would you shut up and stop being evil? god! I tried my best, and I accept critizisem, but not being mean just like your attitude.

Go bugging someone else =\

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I'm not being evil, i'm just saying stop telling yourself it's an amazing alt when it isn't by far. And i only said that if habbo had pixel errors all the time people wouldn't play. My comments are similar to many in this thread - so please stop aiming your complaints at me.

honestly, this doesnt deserve to go on elites but this is good work :)


pixel errors stated by dollars - you should fix them

overall 7-8/10

Definately not a must see but it's ok.
6.5/10?

I Like to see people combining alternations together to make something neat, but there are alot of Pixel errors and most were pointed out.. Id say
8/10

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Originally Posted by lone_wolf

I have only one comment for it...

Crap

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Please don't give abusive comments like that without something to back them up like CC. You havent even tried to explain what is wrong with it.

ahahahha he badded repped me :P (not cpt.kwl)

Same here. Didn't even put a name. He's given everyone a bad rep who told the truth.

What a funny n00b...

I have to give CC for the comment i gave saying 'crap' well here it is...


Throw it in the bin & dont make an alt again ^_^

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Originally Posted by Dollars

Should have gone to specsavers. Let's read some of the other comments in this thread.





Please shout at these people before directing it completely towards me. Now, for your errors, i thoight i'd point out a view seeing as you seem to be completely oblivious to the fact this alteration should not have been reposted.

http://img371.imageshack.us/img371/6136/kobi11xv.png
Lets explain further:
1. Grey/green line in the floor, shows no effort whatsoever in floor shading.
2. That icky ball thing. What is it? Why is it so poorly shaded? And why does the shading go light/dark/light when it should be getting darker.
3. Who has ever heard of a blue shadow please raise your hand.
4. The stand has some pixel errors in as well as black lines which are not needed, somebody got black line happy in this alteration.
5. A copy and paste mark, it looks like this alteration has been cut out and pasted into the main 'masterpiece' and then poorly coloured in after.

http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/2057/kobi24gx.png
Lets explain a little further:
1. The divide has pixel errors again.
2. What in gods name created this desk? Either somebody got it off a scrap heap or lost their instructions for a flat pack ikea shelf.
3. Who spilled white paint on the desk? I just don't get why there is a white square there. In fact it can't even be paint because it's so square.
4. Everything is black, no shading and to top it off it's outlined in GREY.
5. That amazing floor again. Next time you print screen a habbo room put in the effort of colouring in ALL of floor? And maybe so the colour do not clash as bad.

And as for the me being terribly jealous of your alteration please take that thought out of your head immediatly. Hey, maybe you can check out and comment on one of my recent alterations sometime:
http://www.habboxforum.com/showthread.php?t=148150 - Furni Xposed
http://www.habboxforum.com/showthread.php?t=148283 - Recliner
http://www.habboxforum.com/showthread.php?t=147966 - Coaster Pieces
http://www.habboxforum.com/showthread.php?t=147914 - Tea Light

Hey i'm not amazing at alterations, i'm not special at all but at least i don't inflate my own head so much it won't fit out of the door. How do you fit so much self excellence in your post.

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Just thought i'd quote myself to emphasize the point that this alt is quite bad.

Hahahaha,And he has the cheek to call you jealouse HAHAHAHA

4/10. It looks good at first, however, once one begins to observe the errors become clear. The shading, the lighting, what were you thinking when you chose those colours? First impression = great. Second look = terrible.

Definatly NOT a must see.
There are many pixil errors (cant be botherd to point them out)
The bunnys make me want to throw up and your shading is atrocious.

Rabbits arent the best. 6/10 +Rep

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Originally Posted by Sunburn

Rabbits arent the best. 6/10 +Rep

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you give hime a 6/10 then rep him?

great, like the colors, dollars was being horrid, overall 9.1'23'/10.0*

This starting to be stupid.

You two now proved how n00b you are by nagging all the way. Maybe ""I was wrong"" first place, and didn't let you say your nasty comments about my alt (crap), but from then, It just started being a kind of noobs revenge, non stop bad repping me, quoting urself, keep being mean. This showing how noob you are.

You two are sad.

And especially you Dollars, trying to revenge me after we fought , rofl. You make me laugh. I won't say about lone_wolf because I don't think he deserve a comment. He is just another n00b or maybe a clone of yours, I won't be surprised.

IMO, I hate it. & as you said yeah, you had you're opinion before, well I'll have mine, it lacks shading, it lacks colour co-ordination and ofcourse, it lacks talent.

the only decent thing is that dragon

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Originally Posted by kobi626

This starting to be stupid.

You two now proved how n00b you are by nagging all the way. Maybe ""I was wrong"" first place, and didn't let you say your nasty comments about my alt (crap), but from then, It just started being a kind of noobs revenge, non stop bad repping me, quoting urself, keep being mean. This showing how noob you are.

You two are sad.

And especially you Dollars, trying to revenge me after we fought , rofl. You make me laugh. I won't say about lone_wolf because I don't think he deserve a comment. He is just another n00b or maybe a clone of yours, I won't be surprised.

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Despite the fact everyone is agreeing with me?

The sort of comment i expect from a 12 year old though. Kobi, i'm not 'revenging' you as you so stupidly call it, i'm just telling you the truth like evryoner else what a bad alt it is. You're basically calling everyone in this thread a n00b which i highly doubt they are - just because they are disrespecting your poor alt. You sound like the typical immature person who think's everyone is a n00b except them because they are so 'elite', well this is your wake up call.

You are not.

And i only bad repped you once for your rep for me telling the truth. After that i think everyone in this thread bad repped you for your immature attitude.

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Originally Posted by Kobi626

You iz all n00bs cos my alt is 1337 and u iz all n00bs you two are n00bs the whole world is n00bs go get your make believe clones and get out of my 1337 alts thread all j00 n00bs

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Really awful colours, but good overall idea, and if you stick with it it could really be improved.

6/10.

Just remember, that is above average. All too often these days, people seem to think that 6 or 7/10 means something is bad.

I have to say, you've put effort in, but the black and blue is not working, try finding a dark blue off of habbo, use that one. :)

I'll get the criticism out of the way first. A lot of things on your alteration look out of proportion and as Dollars has excellantly spotted, there are a lot of tiny mistakes. The shading on the fountain could also improve.
Overall it is a great piece of work and must of taken a long time, so i'll give you a 8.5/10.

When does Furniture cast a Light Blue Shadow on a Dark Blue Floor?

Agree 100% with Dollars.

that isn't a ''must see''
thats a ''throw it in a bin''