First Furni Alt :Habbo Papers

Hi this is my first furni alt habbo papers below. If you would like 2 comment, please contain:- general comments (improvements and good points) and a score out of 10 :) .
Please note :- it may be a bit blurry but i tried uploading it on 24-bit map and the file was too large so its jpeg instead.

Cool. But The Writing At A Fuuny Angle And Looks Worng. 8/10 :)

The writing looks funny, but other than that, its pretty good. 7/10

I think i will agree with the writing but when you try and make it in a straight line, it looks even more wonky lol :)

k thanks for the tip although i dont get wot u mean by the lines :/

I would give it a 6/10 because
1st - The angel of the text is wrong
2nd - You saved it as a gif

Ive sorted it out to what i think would deserve a 9/10
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...ther/paper.png
Ive-
Got rid of the fuzz
Removed most of the text

And Remember

SAVE ALL IMAGES AS .PNG FORMAT!!

very good. try and make an old english paper boy.

ok anderman but if you look at the first post it CLEARLY says its put on jpeg not gif ok :) but thanks for the pic :)

ok heres an improvement of the alt i made earlier in this thread so from now on, please judge the improved alt :)

*Edit by Properclone - Do not double post!!

Very good, Great improvement :) 10/10

And gif + jpegs both ruin the quality

Thanks anderman ;)

The new one looks great but - there is only 2 shades on it, add more shades then it will be great :) 9/10

Thanks alex. Look closer and u will see there is infact 3 shades on it ok :)

Ok, but its blocky though, it needs to be smoothe

Great Improovement! 9/10

Thanks for the comments :)

There very nice, its nicer when they are cut out (anderman's update).

the writing's a bit dodgy but its still good. 6/10

lol thts funny
good for a first alt :P

thanx :D

Hmmm Rather Good I'll Say , 8/10

cool its be cool if we oder them wit credits but it shud have like codes in it and coupons for credits