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Hmm, some of you may have seen this before. Ive taken everyones c&c into account and produced a much better version of the hotel. Ive added small tiles and reflections to windows. Added shading and removed un needed lines. Fixed small errors ect. Well here it is :
http://img93.imageshack.us/img93/9025/tot8ux.png
Thanks everyone for the old C&C and ratings, I need more though xD
Thats awesome!!! I am loving the roof... no I'm loving all of it!!! :D Well done. Im quite impressed.
10/10 + Rep ;)
Well done, one thing I would say it the door on the pool roof, that could be edited, make the little cover above the door more parasol'ish, :)
The 2 floored building on the bottom right seems a bit too far forward, thus loks higher, so if you could move that back a bit I'd be happy, and not scowly. :p
The little benches in the front are good, but how'd they get into it. I suggest either a door in the window, or remove a few little bushes, and then put two larger bushes either side of the gap.
I love the way you've put the mirrored image onto the little water, that is well done, I love it.
Overall it's a 9/10 as I, not that I could, would edit it a little bit.
Well done. + rep.
Wow, nice improvedment, although I didn't see anything wrong with the first one :eusa_clap 10/10
ooo nice lol 10/10 +rep
Amazing! That deserves to be in Elites!
10/10 - Really can't see any problems.
+Rep
wow i luv it +rep
Woah. I mean, WOAH!!! You have a TALENT man!!!!! 76143/10!
ELITES!
The roof is still jagged >.>
Gosh, that is excellent, and deserves to be in elites IMO.
I can see no errors with it.
As my thread ahead, I can think of things you can do to make it better, but I didn't mean to make it sound like I don\t like it. I love it, but I would love to see some things edited.
thats the worst error i can find 10/10Quote:
Originally Posted by Wootzeh
the boats shadow ;)
looks awsome you have alot of talent :)
Yeah I'd say its elites worthy aswell :) I love it... (Maybe try animating it. That'd be awesome. - Just a suggestion). By the way I gave you that rep I said in my first post. Lol I forgot last night :rolleyes:.
Joe
I told you about the boats green shadow (Not the light blue one - its part of the deisgn) and you fixed it in the pixel art forums.
Why is it back to green?
:(
And the light blue bit may be better another colour and perhaps shadded
Wowow! 10000/10. That's better then our Hotel View!
WOAH! So good, I'm loving it! 10/10!
That's just amazing! You're seriously talented. :) 100/10. Elites pls. <3 +Rep too.