New furniture range: Oriental

This is a furniture range i have been working on the last couple of days.
Please dont spot the pixel errors every furni range have pixel errors so please dont. I dont like the little furniture in the catalogue page.
Oh i forgot, i'm not so good at englisch so there are going to be a lot of languase faults in the catalogue page and in this text :P

Here it is:

Al the furni:
http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/9677/chino5be.png

Catalogue page:
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/9...talogue7sl.png

Furni in a room:
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/9...oriewnt4ry.png

Please rate */10

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Originally Posted by Brainpower

This is a furniture range i have been working on the last couple of days.
Please dont spot the pixel errors every furni range have pixel errors so please dont. I dont like the little furniture in the catalogue page.
Oh i forgot, i'm not so good at englisch so there are going to be a lot of languase faults in the catalogue page and in this text :P

Here it is:

Al the furni:
http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/9677/chino5be.png

Catalogue page:
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/9...talogue7sl.png

Furni in a room:
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/9...oriewnt4ry.png

Please rate */10

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wow maybe make the bit in the middle of the sofa go vertical it looks better

still 10/10 + rep

It's excellent however you should allow people to spot your errors so you can improve.

As I said in the last thread the sofa line in between the two cusions needs to go verticle and not slant.

+rep if I can again.

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Originally Posted by chrisbes

wow maybe make the bit in the middle of the sofa go vertical it looks better

still 10/10 + rep

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Done,
good advise!
http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/4263/chino5ah.png
http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/7...oriewnt3in.png

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Originally Posted by Brainpower

Done,
good advise!
http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/4263/chino5ah.png
http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/7...oriewnt3in.png

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ok can u give me any tips? please i cant really make the cusion the right size lol

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Originally Posted by Evolution

It's excellent however you should allow people to spot your errors so you can improve.

As I said in the last thread the sofa line in between the two cusions needs to go verticle and not slant.

+rep if I can again.

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Ok,

You can post the pixel errors in the thread where it was still WIP.
:P

For Chrisbes:

If you have two cushions with no line in between count the pixels of the line and than paste the line in the middle.

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Originally Posted by Brainpower

Ok,

You can post the pixel errors in the thread where it was still WIP.
:P

For Chrisbes:

If you have two cushions with no line in between count the pixels of the line and than paste the line in the middle.

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yea i know lolz i just need like ideas for ranges

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Originally Posted by chrisbes

yea i know lolz i just need like ideas for ranges

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Hmm....

Bone, ice, fire, evil, crystal, dark, royal, stone, fururistic,
cyber

Is that enough? lol

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Originally Posted by Brainpower

Hmm....

Bone, ice, fire, evil, crystal, dark, royal, stone, fururistic,
cyber

Is that enough? lol

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umm i dunno lolz thanx anywayz

With the sofa it looks like one side is bigger then the other, when its IN a room.

That is because the thing where you pute your arm on is in front of it.

the actual oriental furni looks tons better,

may i suggest that colour scheme isnt that oriental

the bit on the sofa,the couch join in the middle,where it goes down,it does so at a wrong angle,it should be diagonal till it meets the last brown bit and then go straight down

WOW 9/10 keep it up.

Oi, I gave you that name! Lolz :eusa_danc But v good.

One of the sofa cushions is deff bigger than otha i can see in room and when they on their own outta catalogue

still good though 9/10 + rep

When you flipped the letters, it made a different word probably. You have to do it pixel by pixel again for flipping letters.

The room seems tooooo brown. Also needs some shadows under the furniture.

Couple Mistakes in the room, but apart from that 9/10, class bit of altin.

I love that, looks great. Loving the poster. Well done, 10/10 +rep.

Pretty gurd , hah like them :) Nice work

Wow :o I love it, best furni range Ive ever seen. 10/10 +Rep

Jokin! Its terrible!! 0/10!! No. Im actually joking that time. 10/10 for sure :P

Although some of them do remind me of iced furni, but meh.

Excellent 10/10 Rep++

fantastic!

effort: 9/10
work: 8/10

All I can say is "wow" .. I absolutely love it, I think it's magnificent. 9/10.

its good except you got posters that say dog everywhere. maybe you could alt another chinese character into a poster. and the seats look to small.

maybe make they pinky color more of a tan colour. 9/10