NEW LAYOUT unfinished

this is my first layout as i did it in paint it has lost its quality when i saved it so please r8 and give my ideas on how to make it better

http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f1.../NEWLAYOUT.jpg

please rate and c&c please

6/10, not very habbo-y

how shall i make it better but not 2 advanced cos its my first 1

It looks a bit dull, maybe try adding a few habbo pictures and using a brighter colour?

ok will do thanks

*update*
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f1...nnerlayout.gif

ugly white space on update but better anyways, try a tutorial or 2 to get ideas. Its a good start 6/10

Make all the writing habbo style and then you can use a nicer font.

NEW UPDATE PLEASE RATE IT

http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f1...navigation.gif

Use a nicer font like Tahoma or Volter (Habbo font)

Don't use full caps and use proper spelling and grammar eg. radio to Radio
otherwise it looks a bit tatty.

ok thanks any more comments :)

its getting better slowly 6.5/10

sorry for all updates but what now?

http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f1...avigation3.gif