AK Enterprises - Original & Vandalised.

You may remember my other thread on the original 'AK Enterprises' piece, which recieved oh so many replies. *cough.*

Anyway, I decided to, vandalise it, maybe? >:]

As you can see, the vandalised version has been the victim of a fire, hence the fact it is closed down and the windows are boarded up. There is also the burn marks above the windows, which give you a bit of a clue.

Anyway, Here it is.

Original
http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/4...dingwmk1nv.png

Vandalised
http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/3...kvandal6zo.png

Comments, CC and hate mail is appreciated. =]

Edit: I've just realised, I meant to put this in Non-Habbo related. My bad, could a mod move if possible?

:o 10/10 +rep :) Awesome 1337's pl0x :D.

OH MY DIZZLE! That is one piece of art!! 1000000/10 + Rep!!!
Def good enough for Elites!
How long did it take to make?

Wow that's brilliant! + rep.

9/10.
Love the burnt effect.

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Originally Posted by Ramon

OH MY DIZZLE! That is one piece of art!! 1000000/10 + Rep!!!
Def good enough for Elites!
How long did it take to make?

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A few days to do the original, and an evening and a bit for the burnt-vandalised version.

Thanks for all the comments. =D

See, i'm so lazy and have a short attention span so i wouldn't be able to cope spending that long on pixel art. I would do 2 hours max then give up.

yep same but still that is one really good alt

Oooooo Fantastic

ELITES
ELITES
ELITES!!!!!!

Thats really good 9/10 Nothing is perfect. But i would say Elite Worthy

Looking great, well done Adam :]

I have only one issue withit (i would :P) and thats the boards on the windows, thy seem too thick, maybe the 2nd ton lines should touching the outline? just a suggestion. Other than that. Its more that Elite worthy! 9/10

10/10.
elites pls.
kthnx.

The boardes over the windows are different colors (Not because of the shade)
One is a caremel like brown and the other is reddish
They should be the same just darker.

I like it. +REP

10/10 eliteness xD

Fixed:
-Some pixel errors inbetween the burn-marks and the boards.
-Shading on window boards.
-Colour of interior in small area exposed on door-board.

http://img234.imageshack.us/img234/2...kvandal6nz.png

great 10/10

I love it, I would like it in elites. 10/10

Beautifuly done. Love the graffiti and burn marks.

Elites indeed. 10/10 +rep

10/10 elites.

Guys, I really appreciate your comments. =']

-Cough- I Would Say Some Very Rude words but i don't want a ban, i'll just say 10/10 +Rep Absolutly Fantastic

Thanks all, I didn't expect such good ratings. ^_^

What alot of bollocks and a waste of effort.
That's awesome Adam, Just make the boards a wee bit thinner if you can be arsed. 10/10 +rep if i can ;D.

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Originally Posted by Adam

Fixed:
-Some pixel errors inbetween the burn-marks and the boards.
-Shading on window boards.
-Colour of interior in small area exposed on door-board.

http://img234.imageshack.us/img234/2...kvandal6nz.png

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Gee Adam, you know how much I love you and want your babies and everything but...
The rust on the shutter is too clumped together, perhaps spread it out and add a few more shades of grey or even of browny gold.
Maybe add a Grey Line underneath the railings to make them look round and mettallic.
Maybe add a few more shades to the rubble to give it depth and make it stand out.
Perhaps dirty the rest of the building to make it look old and used, like that factory on PixelJoint.

Other than that, it's bloody amazing.

Wow thats amazing I liek the graffiti :)

Fantastic! 10/10. :) It's Elite..

looks great but the wood boards dont look to woody, maybe some texture detailes.. other than that great 9/10

10/10. I can't see anything wrong with it. It's awesome.

ELITE ELITE ELITE

I don't honestly think it's elite worthy?

Maybe add some holes in the roof to show it's been burnt through.
Very good, if you add a bit mroe detail, and more vandalization and more burn marks, it would be elite wrothy to me.

Very nice Adam :p 10/10. I don't think I can rep you atm as I have to spread but yeah I'll remember. =]

nice "alt" lol of your pixel art the orginal could be improved with a middle dithered tone on the bricks and you could make some nice textures
for the ground lol that whould be fun if you let me help you do it :P

I appreciate you offering to do the floor but in my current situation I'll have to give it a miss.

ok mate nice job anyhow :P

That's awesome! + Rep [If I can]

Nice one! 10 out of 10! Nice zoidberg avatar by the way. :P

I know I have said it before, but I'll say it again. I really appreciate all your comments. ^_^

there both greeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaatttttttt well done