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No words really... it is what it is lol
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No words really... it is what it is lol
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Great, love it +rep
I'm lovin it, no pixel errors that leap out, I haven't looked at it too closely. I like the fact that some of them sit on red pillows, it's a good idea. 9/10 +rep
nice... +Rep
i like it.............its goood keep up the good werk 9½/10
A bit strange how the same lamp gives off such a varied amount of light. xDQuote:
Originally Posted by Acidulantes
Still, not bad. :D
6.5/10
some of them have stronger bulbs in them :P
The lights look really perculiar, because the light is so strong.
You could try making the opacity smaller, or use a gradient (white > transparent) to the fill the area.
It looks nice, but...
The lamps are nowhere atached on
And the shirts have no left side.
It's a pitty.
beautiful +rep wen can
E1337's 10/10 + Rep
Its brill, nothing majorly wrong. 9/10
the baseball is on partly the stand partly random blue.
i dont get those stand things how its like the floor has changed
dislike the lights give different amount of light
the wall shading is a bit off
the window/screen at far right i dont get the background of it
8/10
I shall nominate this for elites I like it so much
The shirts dont have sides because they are squashed... you know like when you frame a football shirt?? the lamps are supposed to look like they are *****ed onto the tops of the framesQuote:
Originally Posted by Reinout--D
Looks good, 9/10
Thx natta :) and lowdetail :) Im gonna redo it, but when I get a list of like 5+ improvements...
Things to fix: The edges of the glass cabinets that face us should be a lgiht glass color, Shade the frame around the world cup trophey, remake the world cup trophey so it is iscometricd and so a person in fron of it would see the full body of the person on it, Get rid of the part that joings the stands to the floor unless somehow you managed to carv the floor and the stands uot of one large piece of wood, by using shades show that the world cup trophey is actually in a small room and not floating in redness, Give a shadow to the world cup trophey's pillow and your character, add texture to the rug, Give the pillows in the cabinets shadows, the shirts and tops should have another dimension to them so they are not just flat or at lerast part of a dimension tos how that there is actually 3 other sides to the piece of clothing, Give the balls in the cabinets a shadow on the pillows, If something need more light from the light you should make a larger light instead of varying the light given off by them, add shadows to the wall cabinets that would be cassed on the wall, Give the plaque on the wall some lightening and shading to show that it is a shiny gold/brass object, the floor (If you will) of the cabinet with the baseball has one side wood and the other side blue - please fix.
Some things in the room that arent purely from habbo are quite basic and it shows.
Quite a few things in there that need improving.
Suggested additions after maintinence: Velvet ropes around cabinets, scrap the would floor and make a polished white tiled floor, scrap the blue wall and make a dark reddish, light brownish or creamish color (If that happens give cabinets a gold trim), Add security cameras, Make the room bigger and add other sport related things, add people/guards/curators,
it's a great picture, but i think that it can be even better :P
here i have pointed out some of the stuff that it think that you should fix :P
http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/6489/fejlgr4.png
Ok Points taken... Ive made the world cup grey box around it thingy sticking out of the wall, Im gonna make the rug look fluffier lol, Ive made the plates look 3d and shiny... Ive altered the puck a bit but I dont know what you mean... and Ive done some points captn kool said... so by the end of the night it should be all good :) Thx for your points guys :)
Dude!Quote:
Originally Posted by Reinout--D
youre drunk.
They are on the wall ;]
Nce alt as well 10/10 +rep
Lights are too bright
balls are too big (not as big as mine tho)
cricket ball glass container near the pillow you can see through it into the blue wall
And i didnt read other comments so i dunno if these have been pointed out...
8/10 great idia but i expect more of a Habbox Graphic Designer
Yea there isnt a cricket ball... Im startting to think if I should turn the lights off??
Quote:
Originally Posted by siz
and Im a graphics designer so I shouldnt be judged on that for my alteration skills...
Looks great. I love it.
Very very good and are you still gonna post the updated version?
Cricket ball, i fink ul find it is a baseball, wrong sport and wrong country :P
Very good 10/10 +rep
Elites !
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I like it. Just a few things, the lights seem a little odd and on your updated one, the pillow with the baseball on seems to be floating. Good attempt. 7/10.
very nice!
All the lamps are the same size but give a different area of light, i would make the smaller ones bigger and the larger ones a little smaller/
Old alt... Im not doing any more to it... close the thread please.