Ok this is my flying stool.
Please give me some CONSTRUCTIVE criticsm
And a grade out of 10
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Ok this is my flying stool.
Please give me some CONSTRUCTIVE criticsm
And a grade out of 10
You need to upload it to http://www.photobucket.com then put the url in the image tags
Um just be logic..if the fire was under stool which is made by wood it would burn? :) and um make it more habboish..more shading and fix the pixel errors.
:( I am a bit young for all this but there you go, thank you
3/10 the lines comeing off the flames look kind of out of place and ya the stool would burn like he said but good idea took some thought.
Yea, cool idea. Need a bit of work. Maybe add a burnt effect to the bottom of the stool, make the fire a lil neater and lil more realistic and then post it for us to see when u done :D
Ok Ive added on some burnt affect, I wouldnt say its good. I know what colour to use. :eusa_pray
Becky that is a pretty cool stool. Perhaps instead of fire you could have wings? why not have a go 7/10.
I can See That You Probably Took Quite Alot Of Time Into This.. But You Need To Work On Shading And Line Neatness
Lol pretty cool!
It would be very painful to sit on ;o
Young! :s im onlt 12 and I can make some good alts, I think... :rolleyes:Quote:
Originally Posted by BeckyRox
:eusa_danc Im younger than you
Ok heres my Angel one!
Im pleased with the shading on the wings, it is better that the fire one. I also like the halo!
A very impractical alt and idea.
4/10 as there is no shading and the lines are bad.
Just add shade, better lines, and maybe a little animation on the flames if you can.
No shading!
Didn't you read my post?
Sorry, i can't agree with the shading.. there's shading everywhere something in a thing.. goes in. You only shaded the bottom, as i see there is more places that's not flat, mark it.Quote:
Originally Posted by BeckyRox
Ok, I think these are pretty good! The colours on the fire one are nice and bright, very different! The angel one is funny! I LOVE the halo you did!
Like the others said if you are looking for perfection then practise with shading, but I maybe tend to sway more towards the idea then the actual alt, and I think the idea is crazy but hey that's what we like :D
8/10 - You have a lot of potential! definately!
Rofl you seem to love stools.
I love the angel one. I can see people flying around on the fire stool burning peoples hair. *thinking* *If I had one of those I would fly over Callie's head* *Oops sorry Callie it was an accident :eusa_ange :angel1: *
Muhahahaa
Anyway the shading needs to be better. 7.87/10 (That's a werid rating lol)
i quite liek both of them , you do easily show potential
Lol. It isnt about what you said you did, its what you actually DID do. I dont see shading.Quote:
Originally Posted by BeckyRox
I dunno what to rate it, it's an 'OK' alteration, but kinda simple..
Too simple -_-' Please post when u have better alts
lol its betta than i could do!
Lol :eusa_pray It made me laff!
I actually thought it was pretty funny....
Nice idea, you should have no problem in finding ideas for future alts.
not a very good alt soorry, i dont lek it. fire doesnt go with wood unless the wood is meant to burn. 5/10
The stool would burn :S
I Think It's Pretty Cool, Not Every Day You See A Stool Catch Fire :)
9/10 For Some Reason Lol It's Cool For What I Would UsE It For *Thinks Of Evil Plans* ;)
Not bad as a picture.Quote:
Originally Posted by !xx!kyle!xx!
But having it as an item on habbo or an item in real life is impossible, you would burn and die
I think you should make it a floating one, since wood floats?
What do you think?
Its very unique, i agree to that.
I rate it 6/10 as a picture
4/10 as an idea to put on habbo
You people are being a bit ignorant. Its meant to be a flying stool, the flames are from the engines, like a rockets. Don't try to be smart by saying "oh but the stool will burn"
A good start but the lines and everthing need improving ;)
The flames must of taken a lot of time but its just a regular stool pasted in. You should shade it in more for a habbo effect on the flames and like someone above said the wood would burn so make like a aluminum one or something :P