Fisher

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24-10-2006, 03:02 PM
Axel

Fisher

I made this ages ago, and expanded on it. Rate and C&C please.

http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/5248/fishingfa4.png
24-10-2006, 03:06 PM
Minix

Pretty good. I hate the colours you've used for the grass and water though
:(
Pretty funny what you did with the boot :)
The grass definately needs shading, pixel errors need fixing and colours need to be changed. :P
Also, what's up with the guys neck? :O I like his facial expression!

And, um, get rid of the random red speckles on the grass. :P
24-10-2006, 03:06 PM
Machine Head

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kjata

I made this ages ago, and expanded on it. Rate and C&C please.

http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/5248/fishingfa4.png

It's great, but I find the background more better to look at, no offence or anything.

Maybe make it so that the Habbo is holding the rod with both hands?

7/10 =]]
24-10-2006, 03:09 PM
Axel

They're supposed to be jungle-ey colours.
24-10-2006, 03:12 PM
Minix

They don't look like jungley colours though...

And the grass needs more depth. DEPTH!
24-10-2006, 03:13 PM
artistjay

Quote:

Originally Posted by Minix

They don't look like jungley colours though...

And the grass needs more depth. DEPTH!

yes i agree
24-10-2006, 03:15 PM
Axel

Quote:

Originally Posted by Minix

They don't look like jungley colours though...

And the grass needs more depth. DEPTH!

Ye, I didn't know what to do for that...
24-10-2006, 03:16 PM
Coolster :)

It rocks +rep!
24-10-2006, 03:16 PM
artistjay

shading mate
24-10-2006, 03:17 PM
Minix

make the grass taller - for example, his feet could be sinking in grass! And the grass cant just be one colour, oh no. Look at the petal patch for inspiration :)
24-10-2006, 03:18 PM
artistjay

u should use petals actually
24-10-2006, 03:19 PM
Machine Head

Quote:

Originally Posted by artistjay

shading mate

More shading would spoil it :rolleyes: Everythings perfect, just the slightest little change would make the whole alteration perfect.
24-10-2006, 03:20 PM
Minix

more shading would spoil it? What about shadows for the characters? depth for the grass? depth for the water? All would need shading, I'm afraid.
24-10-2006, 03:20 PM
Axel

Quote:

Originally Posted by Minix

make the grass taller - for example, his feet could be sinking in grass! And the grass cant just be one colour, oh no. Look at the petal patch for inspiration :)

Maybe the natives have lawnmowers. :P
24-10-2006, 03:20 PM
artistjay

Quote:

Originally Posted by Minix

more shading would spoil it? What about shadows for the characters? depth for the grass? depth for the water? All would need shading, I'm afraid.

u tell him mate
24-10-2006, 03:22 PM
Minix

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kjata

Maybe the natives have lawnmowers. :P

Mmm yes :)
You've inspired me to make a native lawnmower :P
24-10-2006, 03:23 PM
Machine Head

Quote:

Originally Posted by artistjay

u tell him mate

Why don't you try to defend yourself for once? :rolleyes:

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kjata

Maybe the natives have lawnmowers. :P

Roflmao!

Quote:

Originally Posted by Minix

more shading would spoil it? What about shadows for the characters? depth for the grass? depth for the water? All would need shading, I'm afraid.

Meh, true. I really should take a closer look at the alterations some of the decent people make :P
24-10-2006, 05:58 PM
Joord

Looks great! 8.3/10.