Starwars The station Chronicles

It is just a rough draw up for the cover and a little of the plot i will be sending it to publishers soon, because ive finished all 107 pagers of manuscript. It has taken no more than a year to make.

-My demo cover, Junk-
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h2...CHROINCLES.jpg

-The Plot-
It has been 14 miserabel years since the return of the jedi and Luke skywalker is searching for the new sith. Sith genesis that is, he is the strongest sith ever to live, and must be stopped at all costs. The sith has launched his first space station into the skys that will one day will be an escape for ally troops. The jedi's mission is to find the station and destroy the machine inside it, yet again another downfall is that this machine is processing Other droids and one day could meen huge armys of millions.

Luke skywalkers first and very Young apprentice must own up to the fact of being scared of the force and one day becoming the hero. Young Anthony is trapped in his own force however and finds it hard to use the ways of the force and therefore he must search for the curical key to succes. Young anthonys mission has just begun and Luke's will continue...

-> Thats about it, i still have the odd corrections to make. But they shouldent be that hard. sorry for all the spelling errors in this post. i had to rush it cause its dinner time.

sorry, i couldent edit the orginal but i have now finished everything and sending it in tommorow.

i don't particularly like starwars, but I'm sure some people will find this good and interesting. =]

How can there be a new sith? There can only be one master and one apprentice so it's impossible for there to be a new sith :D

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Originally Posted by Ezzie.

How can there be a new sith? There can only be one master and one apprentice so it's impossible for there to be a new sith :D

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dont spoil its :( tis a good idea good luck with it! cant wait for the lego star wars game of it LOL :P

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Originally Posted by -legoman-

dont spoil its :( tis a good idea good luck with it! cant wait for the lego star wars game of it LOL :P

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I just wanted to be mean ;) but it's true! and i still resent you for making me remove my power rangers sig *cries* red ranger! ^_^

Yes, sith genesis knows the dark side of the force.

:D Yipeeee tomorrow i will find out if its going to be published im so excited

LOl At this thread are you joking dude?

I don't think he is.

if i wad was joking why would i be posting it here and not the Jokes and funny stuff forum :rolleyes:

Can you post a sample?

the work hasnt been copyrighted. Ill post a rough draft.

The red alert began to ring again; the Jedi weren’t bothered in the slightest, they just walked straight into more droids and drew there light sabers and destroyed more after more. Suddenly the alert stopped, the Jedi felt a minute of relief until they saw the figure that they had both feared before, he was staring straight at the Jedi from a distance. “JEDI, YOU CAN NOT ESCAPE FATE SURRENDER” the figure said, the words flew around the room in a hot second and left both Jedi thrilled. The figure started to walk towards the Jedi, however after a few pacers he stopped and noticed Anthony hiding behind Luke, “I SEE YOU HAVE A NEW APPRENTICE” the figure said. Luke told Anthony to run, but Anthony was not prepared to cower out of another fight “I can not leave” Anthony screamed. Suddenly Anthony drew his light saber from his pocket and ran towards the figure, Luke tried to stop Anthony but it was hopeless. Anthony had ran close enough to the figure he swung his light saber but the figure suddenly blocked it with his light saber, the figure growled the figure suddenly stepped back and tried to plunge the beam through Anthony’s head. The figure stepped back yet again and said “YOUR JEDI POWERS ARE TO WEAK I CAN GRANT YOU INFINITIE POWER!” Luke screamed to Anthony “Don’t listen to him, he’s bluffing, now hurry Anthony before you’re killed”.

I know it's a draft but I hope that's not the actual text you're publishing as there were a lot of punctual errors that a publisher would not accept.

I HIGHLY doubt it will be published as it would have to ojed by George Lucas.

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http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h2...CHROINCLES.jpg

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Is it me or does the name LUKE JAMES remind me of some idiot on this forum...

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Originally Posted by Jõnathan

Is it me or does the name LUKE JAMES remind me of some idiot on this forum...

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I remember some thing to do with 'Luke-James' and this will never get published -_-

yeh luke james is the guy who made the cover for me... some guy on a my-space. we met up around a year ago.

the cover is awful and it wont get published its copyright to lucas

Yes, you dont need copyright off lucas at all. Some great titles have been published scot free

like Starwars: The lightsabers tale and Starwar Holiday battles. They had nothing to do with lucas, written by teenagers and were both big hits

YAY, Sofar they have checked 70pagers of manuscript and they say its GOOD SOFAR! :D hurray. just 30 to go befoure a word

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Originally Posted by [ALEX]

i don't particularly like starwars, but I'm sure some people will find this good and interesting. =]

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The publishers seem to agree with you on this =)