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I was making this pool hall when my older brother walked in and decided he could make a better one, so in a seperate thread Ill post it incase you want to move his to elites but mines not good enough lol...
http://ww1.pureupload.com/stfiles/877/Pool%20hall.png
i love it; the sofas are a bit bright though.
suggestion on what colur I should change them too?
The balls on the pool table ruin this piece because they have no shading... shade them and this piece will dramatically improve. The poster on the left is funny.
lol!Quote:
If they don't play pool in Heaven, then I'm not going!
Yeah, the balls on the table ruin it alot!
They don't look right, and have no shading. Also behind the bar, the levers need more shading.
It will look much better :)
8/10
Oh and I don't think you should use default colours for the balls.
Bright red doesn't look right etc.
Some things look too flat while others need shading AND ARE TOO SQUARE. The pool tables are great but everything else could use a little tlc. Very nice work though. 8/10
id rate if i could see it plz could you re host or something coz its... annoying it sounds like a good alt
Edit: can see it
hmm 8/10
needs for shading on the snooker balls it is amazing except that
May I have permission to put extra shading in and post on this thread?
:)
Hmm, on the far right table with no one playing, it has 2 black balls and no blue ball. Also, snooker tables are bigger, and the potted balls go in the pocket net, not down the pocket and into the storage part. Anyway, add shading to the balls etc. A great try though, well done. 8/10
erm I can see two blue balls and one black fine... anyone else see two blacks?? Ill make the blue brighter if anyone else thinks its a black?? and yea pignose saves me doin it sure :P
Its great except put more shadding on the double doors :D
I was thinking of putting wood grain effect on them... Ill put that on today :)
Wow, I actually like this, Make the sofas the same colour as the iced sofas and see how that looks.
Wow is all I can say , wheres your brothers then?
It's great!
But the only thing that annoys me is the "real" posters. If you were to put "If they dont play pool in heaven then i'm not going" in a Habbo font I think it would look miles better. Same with the pool hall one and the dog's playing pool one.
get rid of the ball son 1 of the green tables to make it loook like it isnt being used and maybe put some snooker cues on the table
maybe a veding machine aswell???
Great great great.
Balls are a bit diamond shaped, but that's my only criticism. Very well done!
9.5/10
Okay I didn't do all the shading etc. And I was fiddling around with it etc. It isn't the finished product, just randomness really. Oh and I think I have missed some of the ball things. Where is your brothers alt anyway?
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d1...dsfdhfgwwg.jpg
Please don't rate or slate. Don't even look at it. It isn't very good. I tried to put shading on the balls though.
EDIT: Anyone know how to get it less fuzzy? It isn't .JPEG though.
nice, BUT sofas are a bit bright...