Hotel View - Night

Terrible IMO but here it is enywayzzz

http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/2...lview15im7.png

Thats cool :D 8/10 but theris one thing. Car head lights :P
Well Done

EDIT: 1OOTH POST :D

Good idea I'll add.

Cant edit so heres V2:

http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/2...lview15ub0.png

if theres no light, the hotel wouldnt be shaded like tht. It wud be a much darker orange. And plus it just looks like youve filled the background???4/10

EDIT: EVEN WORSE

I shaded it darker on second one. As I said in first post I thought it was terrible too.

its the purple sky...?
make it dark blue

The blue windows on the hotel should be coloured black. And the blackground needs to be coloured with a darker shade, those buildings, the grass etc. It's pretty much alright, needs a little improvement though, 6/10.

V3:
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/153...lview15dc8.png

Any more improvements that can be made?

The windows on the hotel look awful now, change them back :)

Nah I think they look better ;)

Few pixel errors:
- parking space to the left of car in car-park is still light.
- parking space on main road is light and has error.
- an upright window on one of the buildings on the right-hand "wall" on the background has error.
- some fo the hedges are dark yet some are light.
- the background building, (left of the one with the spire), has a light bit at the top.

Also, the windows on the front of the actual hotel are too dark.. you still should show that there are individual panes of glass. The car headlights are too bright, the blue roof is too light and some of the trees near the car-park have sort of light shaddows. :s

Also, you need to lose the clouds and maybe try adding moon and stars or leave it dark.


Overall, very good atempt at darkening the whole thing.

9/10 for effort and 7/10 for result so far. ;)

Maybe make some stars in the sky? :P

Very good you might want to make the sky colour darker.

9/10