Attached are my first proper alts
Rate /10 and c+c please :)
They are: Lodge Screen and an Umbrella
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Attached are my first proper alts
Rate /10 and c+c please :)
They are: Lodge Screen and an Umbrella
6/10 Sorry, They are facing the direction, imagine them in a room, they would be slanted sideways and neither of them are really very Habbo-ish. Good to see some new people trying though.
The umbrella isn't very good im sorry. 4/10
But the lodge gate. I like it. Its amazing. 8/10
Average - 6/10 :)
Quote:
Originally Posted by -Lava-
Wow - An amazing on my first alt!
Ok well...
The Lodge Screen:
- Needs to be isometric. This means the line is at the ratio of 2:1.
Eg.http://i17.tinypic.com/2v0em2o.png
- Has to many black lines. Habbo always has a black outline on furniture but not many in it. Instead it uses brighter colours to show a corner.
- Blend the shading a bit more.
5/10
Umbrella:
- Too small for Habbo.
- Shaky lines.
- Not much shading.
4/10
The lodge thing looks OK to me, 6/10
4/10 for umbrella
erm sorry they arnt very good, they get a 5 / 10 for effort, you have to make the umbrella bigger for a start.
erm its allrite 4 first alt on lodge thing but the other 1 has shaky lines
the umbrella was rushed but the lodge screen took a bit of time. Thanks for the advice ill bear it in mind :)
I like the umbrella? It's got everything it needs in my opinion, shading, rain drops etc. You just need to work on its form.
Ok thanks. I will do when i can tear myself away from my Presents :P