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(Credit to Lol for the tutorial linked in his/her signature ~ works well)
I created this from a tutorial I found, although I kept roof all the way through as I couyldn't be bothered to change it xD
Works well I hope? Please be kind, it's my first official alt. First one which wen't OK.
http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/7...bbogara1iy.png
EDIT: I think lower right corner is a bit dodgey.. sorry.
its the best first alt i've ever seen!!!! +rep first lol and ermmm try adding more detail and the lines on the garage should be lighter, but ermmm also show me in conparison(sp?) to a actual habbo coz im lazy and then i shall rate wen it rocks my socks ;D so yeah... +rep
Heres some help. Some of it confuses me, the way you've styled it.
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/2507/help2iq.png
DO NOT use thick lines
DO NOT use weird glass things on the glass
DO continue working on alts, and become bether and bether and bether :p
BTW, the tutorial in my guide had some inportant other things you did not use, the light lines...:
http://pixelfreak.com/img/19.gif
That.. zoom in and you will see...
However very nice for your first, I do not see any errors exept the one Xzoid showed you... Tnx for using my guide :p
its gd for a first alt
It looks good, apart from the pointed out errors, and I think the shadow would have looked better facing the opposite way. Nice try.
Updated edition...
http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/6...bbogara8kf.png
I took in the comments you all made (I hope) It does look better now.. please keep commenting! First time i've done something right...
I could not sort out the corner which was mentioned as a pixelerror. I am aware of it.. I always was, I just can't fix it.
+Rep to first person who can fix it for me! Thanks!
Its a great alt, but as you said its your first official (i think youve probably done more) :D 7/10
Is that a compliment or an insult?
Please note..
I used lolligeboy's tutorials. Click this link to see them :
http://habboxforum.com/showthread.ph...51#post2864351
(Plus rep for Lol if I can.. good tutorials and advice)
EDIT: Got to spread, sorry.
Ah.. urrr...
Well, it's for v9 sized habbos. As I did not consider the average Habbo height...
(Apologies for the HC badge, got the Habbo image off GoogleImages)
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/9...bbogara1oq.png
What corner should be fixed?? The one on the bottom??
I do not see the error, but I edited yours a bit.. I also added my XD mark, so you can see its mine :p
Why does the roof has 2 lines actually? and you highlighted the one that does not bend, so there it was not needed..
http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/1678/edit8sc.png
Oh my god!
Fantastic! Would +Rep you buy can't (need to spread). Thanks!
I'm going to make something new now.. please do more constructive commenting on here and my new alt! CHEERS!
the lines were too thick, but you fixed that.
6/10.
my first alt was a person.
Niceeeeeeeeeee lines are quite thick though [:
Thanks, EJW
Well done man its great!
umm somthing about that not sure.. i think its the shadows i like it as its a first alt weldone +rep
I like posted this ages ago, I think someone bumped. xD Atleast i'm not bumping my own thread.
Yeah, the shadow was done pretty rough because I didn't understand how to make shadows.