NEw public room ;]

First public room alt o.o
rate -/10
dont reply pointlessly saying
"Looks great!"
or "Not good"
without a rating -.- Drives me nuts. -.- PS, this place is based on the store "EMilys Deli" in my town xD

edit: Posted in wrong section!

http://tinypic.com/4h5n45

Edited by Soyers (Forum Administrator): Thread moved from Furni Alterations, please post in the correct forum.

I'm sorry, but that's horrible. 3/10. In saying that, it's better than anything I could do. :)

Not so good but public rooms r hard 2 do.
5/10
What is it?

Rofl
THIs REsturant/deli thing in our town.
you can either buy bread and stuff and have them serve it to you there, or you buy the stuff and take it home o.o
sort of like a bakery.. only with meats o.o xD

7/10 It needs more shading sorry

8/10!


Lovley!

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Originally Posted by lauralol

7/10 It needs more shading sorry

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circle the spots with no shading. o.o

I have to say thts most impressive :) Very Good :) I Especially like the writing of "Emily's Deli" But the Chairs look a bit hmm Naff? ( Not trying to b nasty ) maybe put a gap Sumwhere in Them Bottom section of them?
8/10 for Originality , 9/10 for design :)

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Originally Posted by smiddy1234

I have to say thts most impressive :) Very Good :) I Especially like the writing of "Emily's Deli" But the Chairs look a bit hmm Naff? ( Not trying to b nasty ) maybe put a gap Sumwhere in Them Bottom section of them?
8/10 for Originality , 9/10 for design :)

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the chairs are really messed up.. so is the floor if you look at it right o.o
The chairs arent the same size..
and same thickness.
but it wouldnt let me make them identical width and heigth without it looking strange.. and the chairs arent layed out correctly on the floor map x]

the floor needs to be made simpler, and the food counters need more shading not bad overall about 6/10 know u can do better :)

I think you should improve it.... 4/10. The floor looks too busy and der isn't much shading. nor depth to the room.

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Originally Posted by pink@fluff

the floor needs to be made simpler, and the food counters need more shading not bad overall about 6/10 know u can do better :)

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i made the floor how it is in the store.. o.o
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l...l_l.....l
l...l¯l.....l
l_______l is its shape o.o
its weird flooring x]

the food stall-bit..

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Originally Posted by Smawg

I think you should improve it.... 4/10. The floor looks too busy and der isn't much shading. nor depth to the room.

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as said before.
circle where needs to be shading o.o

Yes, then you knows where to colour it in more.

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Originally Posted by Conflictuous

Yes, then you knows where to colour it in more.

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rofl
Excatly x]
you post alot o.o

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Originally Posted by x-Gummiworm-x

as said before.
circle where needs to be shading o.o

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god calm down. stop answering our posts and edit it come on :p

good, 7/10, some pixel errors and floor is sorta weird.

the floor hurts my eyes :'(. And lots of errors. 6/10

Woh that rawks don't care what other people say.. that's awesome 8/10 +rep added

Nice, public rooms are very hard to do, 6/10 for trying :)

Could do with some better sofas and better food.
6.49/10

Its a really good alt but the colours are all wrong :)

6/10, not the best public room alt I've seen..

i like it, 6/10 hi dave

Well I like it.. 8/10

Its not the best, but it seems like you spent a lot of time on it :D

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Originally Posted by Cypher-

Its a really good alt but the colours are all wrong :)

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The colors arent wrong o.o
Its based on a real place in my town.
The colors are like that.

The Colours Do Make It A Bit Less Attractive

:S

Dont blame me, blame them people that built it. xD

the colours arent nice but its a start 6/10

Thats ace... :D but the floor's a bit distracting.. lol its a bit bright..
9/10 ................
+ Good rep :eusa_clap :eusa_clap :eusa_clap