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I was bored last night, so i started working on a pixel-car again :D
I've just finished it now, and then i thought i wanted to show all of you ;P
http://i10.tinypic.com/4d5oxlz.gif
Please rate ?/10, give C+C and please tell me if you think it's worthy to be an elite. :)
Wow, VERY nice :]
Wow, very good 9/10 But not quite elites.
+ rep though. ;)
what do you think could make it better then?Quote:
Originally Posted by @xP
the nose of the car seems to be as if your are looking at it more down from the rest of the body, hopefully you get what I mean, all the rest is isometric and the nose is a little bit out
You have put distance into the nose >.< on isometric it doesn't get any smaller the further away it goes like the rest of the car,
there is a bump over the wheel on this side, no bump on the other side
overall very nice 8/10
I like it, other than the tyres - which aren't quite round enough :p +Rep
I know. I've always had problems with making tires... ;(Quote:
Originally Posted by ReviewDude
I think it would look better with a simple background. Just a road that it's on.
make the wheels rounder. Add a door. Add More shading on window (like a reflection of light from sun kind of thing so they look more windowy and less plastic). make an interoir (dash board, stearing wheel, leather seats.)
i made a really quick edit of yours, loads of pixel errors and stuff, just to give u an idea of what i mean. i think if you do these things really well it would probally be worthy of elites. good luck-isms.
http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/9...titled1sy2.gif
OMG, i can't believe i forgot the door xD... and i kind of wanted the windows to be toned, but i guess that i can try what you're saying :)Quote:
Originally Posted by rezzmarr
But i don't wanna do it right now. I'll probably do it tomorrow :P
I think you need to take the black outline off the front, and maybe add a lighter shade of the grey and the blue you've got going on, so it looks rounder ;D
Not like I could do anything like that. It's really good <3
9/10
Elites =D
lol @ forgeting door ^.^
also i think this is slightly wierd how the shape of the front of the car is different on the left compared to the right..
http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/5525/zoomls2.png
i think its good 9/10 :D
I've tried to fix the errors that people have pointed out. Like for example adding a door xD
http://i18.tinypic.com/48gcc9y.gif
Looks loads better.Quote:
Originally Posted by Goofy
Is it in Elites yet? It should be if it isn't ;D
I haven't checked.
maha i like goofy. you rock :D awsome car 9/10. :D
I guess i have to nominate it first :P.. think i'll just make a thread in the "nominate your alts for elites" :)Quote:
Originally Posted by Meticulous
omg its nice fedtmule <3
i elsker that :P
- on normal english:
i love it!!!
10/10
Elited i think now ;)
Thats great now you have sorted it out ;)
Don't confuse the other forum members by mixing danish and english xD...Quote:
Originally Posted by Plixor
BTW, if anyone is interrested to know, then i have nominated my car for elites now ;)
nice. fixed the unsymetric sides, and door and wheels =] every thing i said. didnt do transparent windows xD still 9.5/10. nice work. i think i might attempt an imprezza.
I guess i was just too lazy to do the transparent windows xD... btw, good luck, if you really intend to make a pixel-car :)Quote:
Originally Posted by rezzmarr
yea ive started, ive made the shape and add a little colour.Quote:
Originally Posted by Goofy
Would you mind showing me over a private message? :)... maybe i can also show you my WIP's then? ;)
sure ill send it now
Round things are hard to do :PQuote:
Originally Posted by Goofy
Very nice car, nice shading too...
I'll try to give you some positive rep.
Uhh :P... that compliment means a lot, since it comes from a pixel-artist like you ^^Quote:
Originally Posted by Reinout--D
Very nice! The right side (drivers side) of the cars nose is too wide when it comes to the door that you cant see. Also maybe add a shine, looks a little dull, like matt.
Very good though, couldnt have done it myself.
9/10 +rep
Amazing xD
I don't really get what you mean with that?... :SQuote:
Originally Posted by Rye1088