Habbox Rare Values Room Spring Version

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I can't put my finger on what is wrong with it, any suggestions on what I can improve and rate it please :)

Love it Dan

+rep :p

First of all put all the hollies together so it dont look weird....
Then take away all the pine apple trees away looks Gay...
Not trying to be rude or anythink!

Looks, wierd but cool.

Its sick but spring we associate with like lambs and white and green and pink etc

I'll come in to help.
You need to make it much less cramped in the entrance bit.
Try and get a few petals too.
Get rid of the gothic aswell. And if you can, get rid of the or some of the Hand-Woven Rugs.

Sexulent room Dan. :)
You need to remove my rights though. :'(

when people go in there will be a blocker which will really anoy people

yeah 8/10 so far, take the gothic out and it needs more bright colours in the room if your going to have hollys put them alltogether as it looks quite odd but apart from tht its good :)

I dont mean this in a bad way, but I find it abit dark if you get what I mean? If there is anyway it could be made lighter it would be even more like spring. ;]
7/10 so far

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Originally Posted by TwoFooted

I dont mean this in a bad way, but I find it abit dark if you get what I mean? If there is anyway it could be made lighter it would be even more like spring. ;]
7/10 so far

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Yeah, I may redo it later or in a few days :)

The entrance is confusing ;)

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Originally Posted by TwoFooted

I dont mean this in a bad way, but I find it abit dark if you get what I mean? If there is anyway it could be made lighter it would be even more like spring. ;]
7/10 so far

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yeah i agree get rid of holly that christmas get some patals and sands and change entrance ppl will block

I would do like yellow, and easter stuff. But i like the room its brilliant, just doesnt remind me of spring!

sand patchs and duck posts plz

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Originally Posted by -:Undertaker:-

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I can't put my finger on what is wrong with it, any suggestions on what I can improve and rate it please :)

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I think it looks far too cluttered. If you keep the gothic cobbles but put a few petals on the other side, it can give it a patio/garden effect.
Clear the entrance of the plants and just have an empty space for people to move there.
Remove the hand woven rugs, they dont go with spring themes.
With the piece on the right, remove the ICMS and replace them with the pillars, and move to all onto the back wall. It sticks out a bit much there. Maybe put pineapple plants around it if you still want plants there.
Make the walls green
Line up the hollies.
Maybe more seating?

Generally make more space, so maybe you can put a centrepiece in the middle? Which looks a lot better than a lot of plants scattered around.

If I was rating it, 6/10 because of the lack of space and the cluttered appearence.

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Originally Posted by TwoFooted

I dont mean this in a bad way, but I find it abit dark if you get what I mean? If there is anyway it could be made lighter it would be even more like spring. ;]
7/10 so far

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If you have something to say, say it straight. Dont say "erm... sir... I have some slight criticism of your room, please dont kill me if i tell you what it is?

:o i like it 9/10 :)

Its too dark. And, I like the waterfall thing :)