Just sent it off for the comp, help me improve it please :D
thanks
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f2.../GreenTeas.png
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Just sent it off for the comp, help me improve it please :D
thanks
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f2.../GreenTeas.png
Actually I like it, 8/10.
Wow thats great! 9/10 +Rep
Thats really good! Could be better with few changes like
- More Hollys
- Changing Area to Shubbery
Hope I Helped:)
8/10 atm +REP.
Am I seeing the same picture?
Tbh I really dont like it. The section on the left needs to have a full floor of petals, atm it looks like youve nicked off with a few to put elsewhere because it just looks half empty. Some of them cover the benches and gbbs, and in a v9 sized room that means that not a lot is actually visible.
I dont understand the centre bit, I can see its arrows pointing towards each other, but what does it mean?
The part on the right isnt too bad, but the rug clashes with the colours. It is also off-centre, making it look untidy.
4/10 from me.
i like the recylce sign (arrows). Good room :)
Open to criticism :P I had layed out the petals before hand on the left hand side to make a pattern but its sort of obscured by the things ontop of it now. And the arrows are a recycling sign, i know its not perfect but its the best i could do.Quote:
Originally Posted by Professor-Alex
Sorry for double post but wouldn't let me add a picture when i tried to edit
Didn't quite get what you meant, I got 2 extra petals 2 cover both sides of the lodge benches or did you mean just entire petal floor like so :
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f2.../greentea2.png
I love the arrows, I saw this earlier when I was in your room (well my bro was in his account and you traded him 2 snowpatches for 2 hcs (humiliated) ) but it is still a bit plain, im not sure what to suggest... 8/10
Well ive done a full holly wall across the whole room now
thoughts please
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f2.../GreenTea3.png
i like it, the recycling symbol in the middle is great!
maybe replace the area bars on the right with some of those maze bush thingys
and a gate?
I think you can do better Comming From your past Rooms :)
7/10
Thats actually really good. 10/10!
Should've filled the walls with hollys.
not gonna bother making mine now.. lol thats awesome.
Thats seriously good dude, I think we've already found a winner. :P
thanks all :D and Fall if you scroll down a little you'll see that i re did the wall :P
i love it, but its just too DARK for me
The petals need to flow togeather, atm they look jagged.
And you need more, the hollys need to flow togeather to.
You need more seating in the main area and more Samovars.
Change the wall colour too, and maybe the cobbles, atm
looks like your not sure what team your on.
well i cant do anything about the hollies because thats the closest they'll get to the corner, and the petals i can add a few more but that won't really help seeing as i have to work in such a small space compared to their size and they are square so you aren't gonna get a perfect outcome. Just because the rooms dark doesn't mean that its a grey pixel room but ill work on getting it brighter :P but might be hard seeing as i used hollies and cobbles.Quote:
Originally Posted by 088!
thanks for the criticism, ill try improve the room
fill in the gaps on the full wall or go back to like it was before
amazing use of area furni and great tie in with the lodge/bb/icm
8/10