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Hey,
I started this room a long time ago and I think its finally finished
I think i have made a bit of a mistake putting the petals by the mats because it just seems weird ( i have now recycled the mats )
well anyway i am in need of c&c and i will +rep ALL constructive critism & commants :)
http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/2...merroomvt0.png
Thanks :) Joe
its good, if not slightly random in some places.
ye, i kinda just put the yukkas down.... thanks for comment +rep of i like your sig aswell ukrane dance
yellow icms not blueQuote:
Originally Posted by merseymusic
the beach has holes in :p remove them
get rid of the yellow pillow and out a fan there.
sunset posters all over the far wall would look awesome imo
add a few more barrel stools next to the ones already there
yellow parsols only
7/10 seems like you were so desperate to post you forgot to add a few things :p
thanks alot, i need loads of beach rubs :o and yellow parasols..... and another fan
hmm to the trade rooms lol, all my rares are in that room lol well most :)
The gaps between the mats look poor. How many beaches do you know with puddles all over it? ;)
I dont see why the solariums are there, if theyre meant to be the sun... they really dont look like it ;) Maybe lots of solariums on top of each other would give a nice effect, but theyll just get switched off and you wont be able to switch it back on again, so it might be an idea not to bother ;)
Spread the seating out, its all to one side
More posters
etc etc ;) Nice try but not there yet
Lamps work well as suns!
stack loads of bball lamps they look like suns
Why are there chairs in the ocean? :S
Most of the improvements have been covered, especially the gaps in the beach.
Perhaps you could section off the petal area as a beach hut or VIP area of some sort?
They are like inflatable chairs - like lilo's or w/e they are calledQuote:
Originally Posted by Nick-
the gold pillow is a bit random
i actually like the room alot well done:)
Ah i see, dont really think they fit but thats just my opinion, i know theyre technically inflated and should fit with the room they dont really. If they were a different colour they would look a lot better as they look like they may be part of the ocean as they are, i understand thats not possible at the moment ;)
More different coloured fans would add a definite summer touch to the room as well, especially more of the green fans
great thanks for all of the comments :d
i will definately add more rugs when i get credz, i dont think i could get lots of bb trophys quite like sun atm. inflatables are quite random but i think it just adds to the sea a bit, would look better of people were on them
i need more posters on that far wall, i'll get them asap and i'll spread out all of the stuff aswell
will probly take a while as i need to go and get credits or go and trade alot so give me about 2-3 weeks and i'll repost with the suggestions made
thanks again rep will be given shortly
Joe
edit: i gave you all rep saying thanks for the suggestions and comments ~ mersemusic
Quote:
Originally Posted by merseymusic
- Change ICMs into yellow, and put them somewhere else
- Remove Gold Pillow
- Overlap brown mats so there are no gaps
- remove petals, they don't fit the beach theme of the room
- remove green fan
- Use a single yellow colour for parasols
- Cover the whole sea area [doormats] with the lapland poster
Looks good 9/10 :)